Pishach

**tamchow** · February 20th, 2008, 03:06 AM

come on rono... ki aste aste kore bolche... pore kihoyeche bolo na....

**mina** · April 1st, 2008, 11:52 PM

ummm who is gone finish this rontur bacha?

**ReeV** · April 2nd, 2008, 12:43 AM

RonoH, Not Smart. Either finished the story at once or DELETE THIS THREAD

U r killing the suspense

I dont even know, that this story has a Romantic ending OR Comedy Ending OR Scary ending. LoL. End it ASAP.

**OvI** · April 2nd, 2008, 10:35 AM

Amio onek age PISHACH nya ekta boi porechilam, and that really pissed me off... yawkk

**mina** · April 4th, 2008, 12:56 AM

ok so when we are we getting ending of this?

ronohungkar · April 4th, 2008, 08:44 AM

charidike ghono adhar neme esheche toto khon e. khujte thaki amra dokhina math er dhare horesh da ke. khujte khujte dol theke ektu shore giyechilo montu, hariken er aloi khujchilo horesh da ke, hotat dekhte pai ki jeno norche jhop er dhare, egiye jai shey aste aste shey dike, kheyal thake na onno ra egiye jacche. Ekta manush er moto mone hoi chaya ta ke jhoper dhare aste aste norche...kache chole jai montu. Hotat.........

Hotat kore dekhte pai ekta odvuture mukh montu. Manusher chehara'r sathe kono mil nei tar. Kemon jano ektu lomba sheyal er moto mukh. Kutkute duto chokhe cheye ache tar dike. Shei chok ta jolche jeno raat er belar ondhokare. Shommohito hoye cheye thake montu kichukhon, hotat dekhte pai hingsro poshur moto egiye asche tar dikey manushrupi prani ta. Jore chitkar kore uthe montu ar chokite gyan harai. Taar chitkare hush fire shobar je montu nei tader sathe. Jore chillate chillate fire ashe shobai, eshe dekhe pore ache mati te montu, kopal theke jhorche taza rokto. Ek doure pashe eshe boshi ami ar mortaza. Buk e haat diye dekhi tokhono dom ache montu'r. Sudhu kopale chuler doga theke chokh porjonto koekta achor er daag, er majhei fule utheche khoto hoye jawa kopal ta. Kemon jeno ek ta lash pocha gondho montu'r ashe pashe. Jeno brishti te bhije poche jawa kono lash er pashe boshe achi amra. Shobai voye voye takate thake chari dike, kintu kichu dekha jai na ondhokar chara. Mortaza bollo ar kaaj nei ei raat er belai khuje, kichui pabo na amra...e bela fire chol...kaal shokale abar asha jabe, montu ta ke o niye jawa dorkar. Shobai shai dei or kothai, ashole voye atonke shobar e behal obostha tokhon. Bekkhahin shob ghotonai durbol hoye gechilo shobai. Dhora dhori kore montu ke gram e firiye ani amra, bar bar kheyal rakhi ar jeno keu dol chara na hoi. Soja horesh da'r ghore eshe thami amra. Prai shobai e tokhon o sheykhane, kauke boye anchi dekhe doure ashe mashima. Ke re, peyechish amar manik re. Mayer mon, omongol ashonkai kukre chilo eto khon bujhi. Kichu bolte pari na amra chot kore, aste aste sesh e boli ami, 'horesh da ke paini mashima, e amader montu...ki jeno dekhe gyan hariye feleche...or kopale kete geche.' "Amar horesh koi re baba ra, or ki holo reee.....dukre kede uthe mashima. Oshohai er moto cheye dekhi amra...aaj ar ei raat er belai pelam na khuje.....kaal shokal hotei abar jabo amra shobai mashima bole othe rohoman. Nijer mone kadte kadte boshe pore mashima, para'r khala ra eshe pashe boshe onar. Edike amra shuiye dei montu ke uthon ei. Tokhono laal hoye ache tar kopal ta. Er majhei kemon jeno bivotsho hoye utheche tar chehara ta, pani diye mukh dhuiye dei amra taar, pani'r chowa pete aste aste chokh mele montu. Kemon jeno ghor laga chokh....jiggesh kori amra ki hoyechilo re montu? Kichu bole a shey....chup kore cheye thake amader dike. Ami mana kori kauke ar kichu jiggasha korte, or ekhon bisram er dorkar boli ami. Shei raat e ar bari jai ni amra keu...horesh da'r bari tei roye jai. Kemon jeno bishchup oboshta shobar majhe...fish fish kore kotha bolche kokhono kokhono....baccha ra awaz korle chapa golai dhomke utchilo hoito kono ma. Barir vitor theke paru'r kanna'r awaz pawa jacchilo.....keu kichu boli na amra....aste aste kemon jeno ektu tondra moto lege ashe amar....beshikkhon thake na jodio....er majhei dekhte thaki ami ghumer ghore...ki jeno tara korche amake.....pran o pone chute jacchi ami..kintu kichutei parchi na dure jete....hingsro gorjon veshe asche pichon theke....ei bujhi dhore fello amai, buk er moddhe dhuk dhuk korche jore jore, ar pari na..ei bujhi pa horke pore jabo...tokhoni.....

To be continued..........

**mina** · April 4th, 2008, 09:10 PM

arggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhh

abaroooooooooooooo tokhoniiiiiiiiiiiii ekhon koto bochor por next part ashbe?

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