Purono ek barite thaktam amra nobi nogor gram er ek prante. Chotto poribar, ma ami ar choto bon. Amader barita besh kichuta dure chilo pasher bari gulo theke, barir sathe bishal aam kathaler bagan. Diner bela gota kotok kormochari eshe bagane kaaj korto, rater bela birat jaiga ta khali hoye jeto, shondhar por por lok chola chol prai bondho. Bari theke besh dure jongoler kichuta govire chilo ek poritakto mondir. Kobe ke jani baniye chilo shei mondir, aaj ar kono naam nishana nei tar. Shondhar por loke ariye jeto jongoler poth, ek chom chom kora nistobdhota biraj korto charidike. Ami abar choto kaal thekei daka buko, buro der voyer golpo gulo ke amol ditam na kono kalei. Ghotona shuru hoi baten mia'r choto chele tar lash pabar por theke jongloer vitor. keu jane na ki hoyechilo, shudhu jana gelo je shondhar por ar pawa jai ni take. porer din dupur bela khujte khujte chole jai jongole tar boro bhai r khalato bhai e ra, shey khanei mile sumon. chup chap shuye chilo mondirer bhitor. ke bolbe ei shei pranobonto chotto chele ta. shara mukh khoto bikkhoto jeno keu prochondo akroshe nokh diye achor teneche shundor mukhta te. shok e vore uthe puro gram ta ei akoshik ghotonai, gogon bidari kannai vore uthe sumon der bari ta. Shei theke shuru nobi nogor er obhishopto ghotona boli! Kete jai kichu din ebhabei shok dukkho ar shondeher dola chole. Thik dosh diner mathai hotat kore.......
To be continued............
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| Hotat kore ki hoyechilo??? kobe jante parbo beddob......  Amar Gaye Joto Dhukko Soi Bondhuare Koro Tomar Mone Jaha Loy | |||||||||||||||||||
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| ummm, eishob ki dhoroner faizlami....keno emon korle....baki part ta ke dibe shuni? Some friends forget, Some move away Some keep silent, Some just change But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments now & 4ever... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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 mintu: Hehehehehehe! Diner bela hok, then baki ta likhe dibo!  Ekhon mui bhoi pai! 
Hahahaha! Bhabiiiiiiiiiiii, tumi eshecho eta tei ami khushiiii! Plz be regular! Ei je dekho niche likhechi to! 
Tanna & Afsu........I just write it man!  Etto chitna kori nai! I live in a world beyond your world.... | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Hey RonoH is this fiction? | |||||||||||||||||||
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| pure fiction ronoH. but im curious to know what happens next.... Learning To Breathe | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Thik tar dosh diner mathai shuru hoi udvot bekkhaheen shob bepar. Romij mia'r goru gulo ke pawa jai boro pukurer dhare. more pore ache shob, koektar mukher theke fena ber hoye esheche. shobai hotombhob hoye jai e ghotonai, obola poshur ki dosh bujhe uthte pare na keu! shuru hoi fish fash gunjon shobar majhe, ami bisshash kori na oloukik ghotonai, amar dharona keu shotruta kore eshob korche. kintu keu amol dei na amar kothai. er por mor nei ei odbhut ghotona boli aro guru tor dike ek raat e. bari chilo na horesh chondro, goru gulo ke firiye ante giyechilo dokhiner math theke. bari te chilo sudhu tar bou ar buro maa. shondha ghoniye ashchilo bole tar bou jai tubewell theke pani tulte, shondhar alo prai sesh hoye esheche tokhon. hotat dekhe dure gacher prante eka eka ki jeno khelche ekta chele. kache pithe ar keu nei, tai nijei egiye jai paru. daak dei paru, ei chele ke go tumi? shondha bela ki korcho ekhane? kache jete nijer chokh ke bisshash korte pare na shey, e to shumon, shei baten mia'r chele. voye pathor hoye jai paru, gola diye awaz ber hoi na kono, atonker sathe cheye thake shey. hotat fire takai sumon ar tokhon dekhte pai paru tar dhok dhok korte thaka chokh ar khoto bikkhoto voyalo mukh. chitkaar kore gyan harai paru. doure ber hoye ashe horesh er maa chitkar shune, "bou ma ki holo re, kothai tui?" khujte thake tini, hotat nojor pore tar dure gach er prante, sheykhane pore ache ke jeno. aste aste egiye jai shey, ar dekhe ekta chaya jeno chot kore chole gelo gach er arale. arektu kache giye dekhe pore ache paru, jore chitkaar kore uthe tini, " ei ke kothai achish, edike aai, amader bou tar ki holo ree" chitkar er awaz shune chute ashe ash pash theke shobai, kingkortobbo bimur! er por dhora dhori kore niye jai shobai barir vitore ar opekkha korte thake horesh er jonno. shondha goriye raat name kintu shei raat e horesh er kono khoj pawa jai na, bari fire na shey goru niye. shobai opekkha korte thake raat porjonto, sesh e gayer chele ra ber hoi khujte take. shobar majhe kemon jeno ekta omongol ashonka dhuke jai. ek sathe hat te thaki amra. charidike ghono adhar neme esheche toto khon e. khujte thaki amra dokhina math er dhare horesh da ke. khujte khujte dol theke ektu shore giyechilo montu, hariken er aloi khujchilo horesh da ke, hotat dekhte pai ki jeno norche jhop er dhare, egiye jai shey aste aste shey dike, kheyal thake na onno ra egiye jacche. Ekta manush er moto mone hoi chaya ta ke jhoper dhare aste aste norche...kache chole jai montu. Hotat......... To be continued........... I live in a world beyond your world.... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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| i can't wait!!! hotat...then ??? dis stories's goin nice i believe. gud goin.  Ŵe čơme 2 ЃΘΛξ ήoT βy fϊήδϊnG ά pЁЯfξςT Person, bΰt βy ЃέaЯήϊnG 2 sέe aή ϊmpέЯfЁcT pξЯsόή pЁЯfξςTЃy. | |||||||||||||||||||
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