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Smile "NiRJoN", Posted December 4th, 2006, 06:02 PM #1 (permalink) |
Kono ak bikele....ghono kal megh'r akash! potha cholte cholte hotat bristy...!!!
tokhon ak chata'r niche dujone...hotat haat te haat'r sporsho hoito kokhono pithe sporsho....!!!
tarpor tumul zhoro batashe chata jokhon ure jai...tokhon kono shobujh mathe kono ak gache'r niche thai....
tarpor ekee onner mukhomukhi hoye hotat ak ojana sporsho nijer thote....
nijer ojanantei shiuore utha!"-ekei ki bole borsha shikto valobasha????- ei kothguloi NirJoN r NeLa'r hridoye bajcchilo bar bar.lojja NELLA k acchonno kore fele ar charidik ondhokar hoye jay tar kache,
shudhu onubhuto hoy tar kadhe ekta ushno shash proshash......
NELA'r hajar proshoner bhir e shomosto kichu olot palot hoye jeno take nistej kore fele,
ar NirJoN k chara prithibir onno kauke onno kono kichuke tar bastob mone hoyna...!
shopno shorge bhashche dujon ekla,hottath bishal bojro eshe NELA'r shongbit firiye ane
NirJoN jodio etokkhon take sporsho koreni.. tarporo NELA'r etokkhon mone hocchilo she NiRJoN'r bahu dor'e joriye chilo,tarpor shei borsha veja shikto valobasha'r sporsho...jei sporshe muhurte jege uthe valobasha....geye uthe shorir ar shob rokto kona eksathe...
"VALBASHI VALOBASHI ...shudhui valobashi".

eito valoi kete jacchilo versity poruwa NIrJON r NeLA'r jibon r valobasha.ekdin hotat e shei borsha shikto valobashai jeno bjropat ghote.hotat e nela bodle jai...kono karon r uddessho charai.Nirjon ekbar noi...du bar noi,onek bar chesta kor tar pobitro valobahsa k shundor kore abr gore tulte.
kintu ek haat j kokhonoi shopno gora jai nah...eta hoito Nirjon vule giyechilo, tai aj Nirjon eka..ekakkito tar shongi, shudhui shei srity r dhushor shopno gulo take tariye berai. NirjOn aj proshno kore:-


"Rodela dupure, shobai jokhon ghume, eka eka shobuj ghashe nogno paye hetecho?
Mon kemon kora kono bikele, kadhe begta jhuliye ghorer lokder bolecho, 'chollam niruddheshe....?'
Batashe megher gondho peyecho kokhono tumi?? Nirob shondhay lal krishnochura gache ek drishtite takiye thekecho kokhono?
jhum brishtite aakasher dike takiye joler phota kokhono mishche tumar chokher joler shahe?

aar...shei manushtake? mone pore....je manushta tumar mone chilo...aache...thakbeo hoyto...?
batashe tar gondho ki pao tumi? brishtir chowa ki tar kotha mone koriye dey?
chader aalow ki shob kichu tar moto mohomoy lage?
jhiler jole ki nijer jaygay tar mukhkhana bheshe uthe
boner shobujer majhe ki taake phire phire phire pao?
shomoddrer dheu ki tar moto obujh hoye uthe majhe majhe??????

shesh bikele eka nijeke joriye haatte haatte ki more pore tar chokhjora?
jhora pata gulo mariye hatbar belay ki tar kotha beje othe shukno patar shobde?
majhrate ghum bhenge gele, barandaye ele kar fishfishani chomke dey shohosha?
ghumer majhe kar haat dhore ojanay hariye jaa tumi?
nodir dhare nogno paye elomelo hata pothe ke chiniye dey aashol poth?
aakasher tara gulo ekshathe kar kotha bole othe shorobe?
chokher joler matamatite kar mukh khana jhapsha hoye othe?
nibir aasleshe kake onubhobe aase, sharabela, sharakhon, shochokito mone?"
aj NirjoN nijei geye uthe:-

"ei bristy veja raat e tumi nei boleeee.....,
shomoi amr kate nah,
chad keno alo dei nah?
pakhi keno gaan gai nah?
tara keno poth dekhai nah..?
tumi keno kache asho nah?


shomudder'r zhoro hawa bole....
tara tumake chai...
tara tumake chai...
pakhi nirghum konthe bole
tara tumake chai....
tara tumake chai...

shorote'r e shondhai tumi nei bole...
shomoi amar kate nah,
kash ful keno fute nah?
chuye chuyye jai nah...
megh'r velai vashe nah..
veshe tumi keno asho nah???

zhore jawa shob osru bole..
tara tumake chai...
tara tumake chai...
hridoy er joto onuvuti ache...
tara tumake chai...
tara tumake chai...

ei boshonto'r e shondhai tumi nei bole...
shomoi amr kate nah....
fulguli keno hashe nah?
hridoye dola dei nah,
abeshe she jorai nah,
tumi keno kache asho nah?"

keno.....???????keno???? keno?

Bichitro manush'r mon. Bichitro tar shob oonuvuti abong khuboi bichitro tar prokash. NirJON tar betikkrom chilo nah.
Nirjon ajo nijeke jiggesh kore "...o amar sathe keno emon korlo? ami to or kono khoti korini.tobe keno o amake evabe shes kore dilo? ki korini ami or jonne!!!?
aor jonne ami amar ma'r sathe mitthe bolechi..baba'r mukhe mukhe torko o korechi. R o...........!!!!
koto bishaS kortam oke...koto valobashtam oke..nijekeo bodh hoi ami etota valobashini kokhono................!amar sathe aor shob onuvuti, shob kotha...shob e chilo nichok khela.
ami keno etto boka!!!?SHototta'r ki kono dam nei?!!!?amar khub kosto hocche...vishon kosto!
o amake valobasheni...Valobashe nah- ei jonne akhon amr kono kosto nei. kebol kosto tokhon e l age jokhon vabi- ami ekta FALTU meye k bolechilam "ami tumake valobashi".
ami kahon ki korbo? aj NELA becche beshe thekeo amar kache mrito, ami jei neela k valobashi shei neela shudhui amr...akhono spondito hoi tar hridoy amr hridoye.
kintu ei NELAA??? BIDHATA, tumi kohono oke khoma koro nah...kono din o nah...kintu ami...ami....????


Aj ei BIDHATA'r gora duniyai NirJoN nei...chole gese tar valobasha'r NeLA k niye gora shopno purno korte,
rekhe gese shudhui srity r ei prithibi'r nela k....NirJoN chole giye nijer nam k sharthok koreche....AJ NiRJoN shottie "NirJoN."
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Default Posted December 4th, 2006, 09:54 PM #2 (permalink) |
Bro really awesome story.porte valoi lagche bro story ta ki sotti ghotona na apni likhechen likhle apni khubi valo akjon lekhok.thanks man for shareing.
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Default Posted December 6th, 2006, 11:37 PM #3 (permalink) |
RiO bro...story'r kahinita khanik ta nijer kothai..ami just aro kichu miliye nijer feelings gulo k rangiye notun ekta rup dite checta korlam...bakita apnra bolben...bhalo lagleo bolben...na lagleo bolben...r kahini'r maze nijeke khuje pabe hoito...ei vebei apnader sathe share kora....keep posting....
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