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Default Ma, Posted December 14th, 2006, 12:42 PM #1 (permalink) |
Otul hsc porikkharti.porar table-e boshe tar mone pore rugno shirno ma'r kotha.jonmer por babake dekheni.babar kotha moneo pore na.doridro hotobaghi ma ek mamar sahajje take ke missionary hostel-e borti koriye dey.porar proti joke thakay tokhon mone hoyechilo jibone boro howar thikana pawa gelo.borti howar char bosor por choppol paye,soto tali deya moyla kapor pore ma take dekhte ase.ekta putlite badha charta pitha ar koyekta komla/ar ekta pauruti.make dekhe tar rage dukhkhe more jete ichcha korchilo.ar sohopathira sobai tar dike obak hoye takiye chilo.niyom onujayi takeo jete hoyechilo somosto boikhata niye tar make dekhabar jonno.kintu se to janto tar ma nijer naam tuku likhte parena ki hobe take esob dekhiye.ma take ador kore pitha komla khete dile se rag kore bolechilo ar kokhono egulo anbe na,ami roj er theke balo khabar khai.
ma mone hoy tar gopon kotha bujte perechilo.tai somoy sesh hobar agei jabar jonno uthe gelo.oneker moto se gelo take egiye debar jonno.jawar age ma take joriye dore chumu kheye hate ekta nil ronger rumal diye bollen,"koyekta taka ache baba tomar ichcha moto khoroch koro."kintu mar dewa sediner se khabar taka sobi sohopathider modhdhe bhag hoye giyechilo.
eto bosor por ma ke tar bishon mone porche,missionary der hostel e kono poishar proyojon hoy na tai hoyto se make bhulei giyechilo.mar deya sei nil ronger rumal ta gale chepe dore se bollo,"Ma tumi kothay?ekbar ontoto dekha dao.ekhon ami tomake khub balobashi.tomar ki mone poore na ei hotobhaga cheler kotha?ma mone pore sei gramer kotha?"


PS : There are some guys who will say dis is copycat.but i will say there are many kinds of stories like this,so i dont know if anyone has written almost identical story any where or not

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Default Posted December 14th, 2006, 12:51 PM #2 (permalink) |
Ashfaq bro nice to see u in Writer's Club, asolei story ta khubi tuchi pore khubi valo laglo.Asolei ma ke chra kono kichui vaba somvob na.Se ak bondhu se akanto priojon.
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