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Default Kaal, Posted July 27th, 2008, 11:03 AM #1 (permalink) |
..Rabindranath er chelebela porchilam..vhut chaplo amio likhbo..amr chele belar kotha..sriti hatre hatre jae jugar korte pari..mondho ki..kobiguru 80 bochor boyoshe likechen..ami na hoe ektu taratari suro korlam..ke jaane oddin beche thaki kina

bt kutteke suro kori..famous karo jiboni jokon pori, dheki ba shuni ki gorbo kore na tara bolen chutokale ki duronto chilen..tobe ki boro hote hole emon durontopona korte hoe.. ..dush-shala jibone kokono tahole bikkato keo hote parbona..damn it!

kintu ke kobe kothae likhe giyechilen je omon chhokh mene boro howa laage..ami tu emni emni boro hoye giyechi..muwahaha..aage ki picchi chilam r ekon koe haat lomba..kar omon buker pata je oshikar kore..

se jaak..ei lekar naam dilam kaal..maane "somoe"..chelebelar kothar chaite je borobelakar kothar e chorachori ghotbe ei shonkae "chelebela" naam dewa theke biroto thakte holo.tar upor gurudev abr shobdo ta use kore felechen..parombik ta ek raki ki kore..

sriticharon er Ghorae chepe tobe hariye asha jaak tepantore..rakhal bashir surer taane..oi duli dushor pother baake..

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Default Posted July 27th, 2008, 01:53 PM #2 (permalink) |
hahahaha asholei...chotobela pore nijeder dhekle partokkho akash patal...kotha robi gurur shei chelabela kothai amader.
Some friends forget, Some move away
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But I知 not 1 of them, I知 here just 4 two moments
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Default Posted July 27th, 2008, 11:32 PM #3 (permalink) |
dintar bornona dewar moto ahamori kichu chilona..surjo uthar uteche..tete uthat kotha..hoyeche..sathe ekjoner mejaj o kotkote kore diyeche..se manos er..tar baba mar jonno dinta bisesh holeo tar mon khub karap..karon aaj theke taake school jete hobe..tar sathe school e jabe tar e ek fufi..boyoshe je manos er bochorkhanek boro.tader school e diye ashbe manos er ek chacha..hete hete tana 20 minute er poth..

kintu e ki obichar!..dujone aaj e prothom school jacche otocho manos ke vhorti hote holo ballo shikkae r tar fufi dibbi prothom sreni te vhorti hoye gelo..balloshikka na porei..manos er sara mukhe kannar megh..ekoni jeno veu veu kore protibader brishti jhorabe..

kintu kuno protivad e kichu holo na..take pathiye dewa holo kunar ek room e..r tar fufi onno ek room e..picchi manos r o dozon khanek picchir checha mechir majhe giye boshe porlo..tar roll holo giye 49.
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Default Posted July 29th, 2008, 01:07 AM #4 (permalink) |
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm tomake keu class er shamne dariye intro dite boleni...
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Default Posted July 30th, 2008, 07:56 AM #5 (permalink) |
jina..etto chechamechir majhe ke jae intro-r khuj nite..dite bolle hoetu bhe kore kede ditam :P
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chelebela thekei notun ke janar proti amr jhuk beshi..Macgyver tv te dekhar onek aag thekei..tobe ojanake janar ei koutohol er daam o dite hoyeche somoe somoe..mone pore babar dami kolom tar vetore ki ache dhekte jeye ki chor tae na keyechilam..parts shob khule r lagate parini bole..ek chorei chitpotang...jibone bhulbo na tar kotha..

barir tv, radio kicchu baad jae ni se chutto manosh er kach theke..khule khule dekechi vetore ki ache..kemon kore seshob kaaj kore..chumbok er proti tokon onnorokom ekta bhalo laga chilo..electric jinish khule khule dhektam kuntar chumbok koto shoktishali..

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kheladhulae parodosshi kunotatei chilam na..na football, cricket, carrom..tobe daba ta bhalo partam..ekono pari kina jana nei..football khele payer joint e joint e haar ghur e sirf alga korechi..amader barir pashei ek dadu chilen..unar kaaj chilo haat payer ei shob banga joint thik kora..Jhom er moto vhoi petam mohilake..kemon kemon kore jeno shob somoe e uni dore felten kothai betha..Tigher Bum chilo unar nitto shongi..bethar jaegae ektukhani meje diye onnodhike takate bole nimeshei thik kore diten..r sei sathe sesh hoto amader gogon-bidari arthonad..

Cricket e khelar chaiteo ball harato beshi..barir samnei pucchi uthan..oi uthan er purota jhure o abar khelar upae nei..ektu kore upore tule marle barir samner dubae..side e marle ghono jungle e..r pechone jodi vhulkrome o jae taile khela pondo..giye porto protibeshir tin er chale..ball ekbar harale khela bondho thakto joddin na notun ball kena hocche..tokon sei tennis ball jugar koratao chilo jeno haate chand paowar moton..shobai mille share e kintam..ekta laav chilo tate..ball harale shobai khujte namto..shobar share je ache ote..jedin karo ekar ball haralo omnie r karo deka nei..haranu ball khujar dayitto ball maliker ekar dayitto..

marbell khelar proti lhub chilo..bt khelata nisiddo chilo amar jonno..pitridev er hukum..kunomotei marbell er ghuti chuwa jabe na..ki jani, hoetu unar bhavna chilo oshob chule jaat jaabe...lukiye arale abrale du ekbar thik e khelechi jodio ba..Chur-Police khelata bhaloe partam..baki shobai chitkar chechamechi kore, khelna bondhuk bagiye dhore chur dhorte chutto..r ami police hole lukiye thaktam churer moto..chur jebhave gapti mere ekjagae boshe thakbe thik serokom..bechara chur, kotokkon r ekjaegae boshe thaka jae..police er sara na peye jei na se jaega bodlate jae omni police moshai rhupi ami samne uposthit...

badminton, kabadi, bou-chi, kanamachi bho bho, saat-chera, pukur jhure satar kora, kunotae baad chilo na chutto manosher khelar talika theke..
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jina..etto chechamechir majhe ke jae intro-r khuj nite..dite bolle hoetu bhe kore kede ditam :P
amar theke to niyechilo....onek gulor majhe banch dariye
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chelebela thekei notun ke janar proti amr jhuk beshi..Macgyver tv te dekhar onek aag thekei..tobe ojanake janar ei koutohol er daam o dite hoyeche somoe somoe..mone pore babar dami kolom tar vetore ki ache dhekte jeye ki chor tae na keyechilam..parts shob khule r lagate parini bole..ek chorei chitpotang...jibone bhulbo na tar kotha..

barir tv, radio kicchu baad jae ni se chutto manosh er kach theke..khule khule dekechi vetore ki ache..kemon kore seshob kaaj kore..chumbok er proti tokon onnorokom ekta bhalo laga chilo..electric jinish khule khule dhektam kuntar chumbok koto shoktishali..

..

kheladhulae parodosshi kunotatei chilam na..na football, cricket, carrom..tobe daba ta bhalo partam..ekono pari kina jana nei..football khele payer joint e joint e haar ghur e sirf alga korechi..amader barir pashei ek dadu chilen..unar kaaj chilo haat payer ei shob banga joint thik kora..Jhom er moto vhoi petam mohilake..kemon kemon kore jeno shob somoe e uni dore felten kothai betha..Tigher Bum chilo unar nitto shongi..bethar jaegae ektukhani meje diye onnodhike takate bole nimeshei thik kore diten..r sei sathe sesh hoto amader gogon-bidari arthonad..

Cricket e khelar chaiteo ball harato beshi..barir samnei pucchi uthan..oi uthan er purota jhure o abar khelar upae nei..ektu kore upore tule marle barir samner dubae..side e marle ghono jungle e..r pechone jodi vhulkrome o jae taile khela pondo..giye porto protibeshir tin er chale..ball ekbar harale khela bondho thakto joddin na notun ball kena hocche..tokon sei tennis ball jugar koratao chilo jeno haate chand paowar moton..shobai mille share e kintam..ekta laav chilo tate..ball harale shobai khujte namto..shobar share je ache ote..jedin karo ekar ball haralo omnie r karo deka nei..haranu ball khujar dayitto ball maliker ekar dayitto..

marbell khelar proti lhub chilo..bt khelata nisiddo chilo amar jonno..pitridev er hukum..kunomotei marbell er ghuti chuwa jabe na..ki jani, hoetu unar bhavna chilo oshob chule jaat jaabe...lukiye arale abrale du ekbar thik e khelechi jodio ba..Chur-Police khelata bhaloe partam..baki shobai chitkar chechamechi kore, khelna bondhuk bagiye dhore chur dhorte chutto..r ami police hole lukiye thaktam churer moto..chur jebhave gapti mere ekjagae boshe thakbe thik serokom..bechara chur, kotokkon r ekjaegae boshe thaka jae..police er sara na peye jei na se jaega bodlate jae omni police moshai rhupi ami samne uposthit...

badminton, kabadi, bou-chi, kanamachi bho bho, saat-chera, pukur jhure satar kora, kunotae baad chilo na chutto manosher khelar talika theke..

tomar cricket er sritir kotha pore nijeke atkiye rakhte parlam na. cricket, carram, football khubi pochondo amar marbel er kotha ki bolbo amar sathe keu partona...ammmur ja mair khaichi Allah. kabadi, bou-chi, kanamachi...saat chara...pit fatai feltam...pukur-e namtam kintu khali dub ditam...nama nishedh chilo...jodi jante parto namchi sheidin kopale bhat chilona r mair ektau matite portona

khub bhalo laglo choto kaler sriti mone pore gelo abar
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I知 not 1 of them, I知 here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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