Choto da........

ronohungkar · February 24th, 2008, 12:10 PM

Shokal ta kemon jani mon mora, mone holo arek ta din shuru je din kichui bhalo lagbe na. Shokale uthe daat majte majte poshim er barandai hat te bhalo lagbe na, pakhi der kichir michir mone hobe oshojjo kor. Buno ta hoi to ghur ghur korbe ashe pashe bhabbe ei bujhi kole tule ador korbe ranu. Kintu takeo bhalo lagbe na....egulo bhabte bhabtei uthe porlo ranu. Haat mukh dhuye porte boshte hobe samnei porikkha. Ghor chere barandai eshe darai ranu, dekhe baba ke boshe thakte uthone. Chup kore boshe ki jeno shunche baba kane dhora radio theke. Kemon jeno hoye gecho oder bari ta bhabe ranu, ager shei hoi choi anondo are nei, shobai kemon jani chup chap, fish fish kore kotha bole ma bhabi baba shobai. Boro da tao aj kaal ar temon golpo kore na bari fire kaaj theke. Kicchu bhalo lage na ranu'r, kona der bashai jawao baron ager moto jokhon tokhon. othocho agey du jone mile koto golpoi na hoto oder bari te gele. mashima'r banano muri chanachur khete khete jome uthto oder adda. Gaan gaito Kona majhe majhe. Obak hoye boshe shunto ranu, ki shundor gola kona tar chokh vije uthto okaronei or gaan shunte shunte. Bhabte bhabte niche neme ashe ranu, khut khat kore ki jeno korche bhabi ranna ghor e. chupi chupi egiye jai ranu, giye dekhe bhabi nasta banacche shobar jonno. pa tipe tipe jeye pichon theke jorie dhore ranu bithi ke. "Bhabiiiiiiii!" Chomke uthe bithi. "uffff, ki je koro na tumi ranu? shat shokalei dushtumi shuru korle, boli paglami kobe jabe tomar, pazi buri?" "Jabe naaaaa" bole fik kore heshe fele ranu. Hmm, hoyeche hoyeche, ebar charo to dekhi, kotto kaaj pore ache. Chere ditei abar kaaj shuru kore bithi. Chup chap bhabi'r dike takie thake ranu ar mone mone bhabe etto shundor hoi ki kore manush? Ei vor belai laal par deya sada sharite ki opurboi na lagche bhabi ke! "Ki go meye, ki bhabcho eto shuni?" ghar ghuriye bole bithi, "ektu nasta gulo niye jao to khabar table e lokkhi buri." Ishhhhhhh, parbo na jao, choto da ke bolo giye bole dour dei ranu upore abar. Ore faki baz meye, biyer por ki je hobe tomar shunte pai bithi bolche takey uddeshho kore. Bier kotha shuntei kemon jani lojja lage ranu'r. Ek doure nijer room e eshe dhuke shey. Tar biyer kotha cholche choto da'r bondhu shumon er sathe. Pash kore berulei hoye jabe biye emon tai thik hoye ache. Shey kotha bhabtei kemon jeno elo melo lage nije keu ranu'r. Samnei jete pare na shey onar lojjai, kotha bola to dur. Othocho koto kotha bolar ache takey, shob thik kore rekheche, kintu samne porlei kothai jeno lukiye pore dushto kotha gulo. bhabte bhabtei shunte pai ma dakche take nich theke, abar niche neme ashe ranu. "accha kobe tor ektu buddhi shuddhi hobe bol to? Bela hoye gelo shey khobor ache?" goj goj korte thake maa. Jiv ber kore dekhai ranu maa ke, dekhcho bou ma dekhcho, ki rokom pazi hoyeche ranu ta? Ar pari na ami ei meye ke niye. "Ar ko din e to maa, er por to shumon ke chara amader ar chinbei na" heshe bole bithi. "bhabiiiiiiiii, dekho bhalo hobe na kintu" bole uthe ranu. "hoyeche hoyeche ebar bosho to tomra nasta korte, protik ta abar kothai gelo" bole uthe maa. Choto da ke dekhe hotat doure ashte ranu, eshe chot pot boshe pore protik table e, bhabiiii joldi dao khabar, versity jete hobe aaj tara tari. "keno? eto tara kisher, tor class to shei 10 tai bole maa. kichu bole na protik, jeno shuntei paini. " ki holo bolli na?" abar bole uthe maa. "uuu? ektu kaaj ache maa, aaaj ora ekta meeting boshabe versity te tai jete hobe" "toke na bolechi eshob meeting e na jete? Tao keno jash? Ki hobe ekhane giye?" " ki bolcho tumi maa? Ami jabo na? amra chup kore boshe thakle ke bolbe tahole bolo maa? Ora tomar bhasha tao kere nibe ar amra boshe boshe dekhbo? er protibaad korbo na?" "aro to onek ache, toke keno jete hobe shuni? Oi je tor bondhu gulo ache ora jai jaak na? toke chara ki oder meeting michil bondho hoye jabe?" "ebhabe proti ta poribar er shobai e jodi amra e kotha boli tobe ke egiye jabe maa? bolo tumi? ora amader nijeder desh e nijer bhasha bolte dibe na ar amra chup kore thakbo? e hoi na maa!" hotat nasta ordhek rekhei uthe darai protik, "ami chollam maa, pore eshe tomar sathe abar jhogra korbo ne kemon?" Ar kichu bole na monowara, sudhu bole " ektu shabdhane thakish baba" Bhabi chollam ei bole ranu'r chul dhore taan diye dour dei Protik. Bhaiaaaaa bole raag kore daak diye uthe ranu!

Nijer room e boshe boshe porar chesta korchilo ranu, college er class shob bondho tao pora bondho kore na shey, porte porte abar hariye jai ranu onno jogote. mone pore jai goto robibaar er kotha. samner uthone boshe chilo shobai chad er alo te. chup chap golpo korchilo ranu, bithi ar kona. Mashima ar o berate eshechilo shey din. Chad er alo te veshe jacchilo chari dik mone hocchilo jeno odbhut kono ek kolponar jogote chole giyeche ora shobai, Kemon ek moho moi drissho, beshi khon cheye thakte voi lage, mone hoi ei bujhi ghum bhenge uthe porbe o. Hotat gaan shuru kore choto da....

"Aji bijon ghore nishitho raat e
Ashbe jodi shunno haat e -
Ami taite ki voi mani......"

Ki opurbo gola choto da'r. Jochna vora shei raat e or gaan shune shit kata diye uthe ranu'r. takiye dekhe chokh beye ojhore pani porche kona'r. aste kore or haat ta dhore rakhe ranu, ki jeno ekta betha onubhob kore ranu kona'r majhe. Bujhte pare na ranu keno emon kore kadche Kona.

Aaj hotat kore mathai ashe ranu'r kona bhalobashe na to choto da ke? O borabor e chup chao thake choto da thakle ashe pashe, kono din kichu mukh fute bollo na to mukh puri. Tobe ki asholei? Bhabte bhabte uttejito hoye pore Ranu, boddo manabe Kona ar chotta ke ek sathe. Aha! "Bhabi bhabiiiiii" bole chitkar korte korte dour dei ranu boro da'r ghore. "Ki go pazi buri ki hoyeche puro para mathai tulle je, eto khushi keno shuni? " or dike takiye bole bithi kapor guchate guchate. "Bhabiii, accha Chotta ar Kona ke kemon manabe ek sathe bolo to?" "hotat ei kotha? Protik kichu boleche naki Kona'r bepare?" "are na na, o ar bolbe, taholei sherechilo!" "Kotha ta kharap boloni tumi pazi buri, oder ke manato khub ek sathe, ar Kona to apon jon er motoi, kotha bole dekhte hobe tomar boro da'r sathe." "Bhabiiiiiiiiiiiii, tumi oneeeeeeek bhalo" bolei joriye dhore Ranu bithi ke. Hoyeche charo charo, shobar din din boyosh bare ar tomar jeno komche!! "Ekhon ek kaaj koro to dekhi lokkhi ti niche ma ke ektu sahajjo koro to giye?" "Bhabii, kisher moddhe ki koi ami etto boro ekta idea dilam ar tumi pathaccho kaaj korte." bole niche neme ashe ranu. Ordhek ta peronor agei dekhe kara jeno dhukche gate diye. Kache ashte dekhe Kona ar mashima ashche, pichone oder daroan Monsur mia. "Maaaaaaaaaa, kona ar mashima ascheeeeeeeee" bole lafate lafate rouna dei ranu. Giye shoja japte dhore kona ke, ei je lukochuri shoitan, aaj tor rohossho fash kore diyechi bhabi'r kache, tui amake porjonto bolli naaa? "Areeeee, ki bollam na sheta to bol agey, horbor kora thamabi tui" hashte hashte bole Kona. "Bol tui choto da ke bhalobasish na? Khobordar mittha bolbi na, ami shob bujhe gechi." " Ki jeno bolte giye hotat chup kore jai Kona, laal hoye otha mukh ta namie rakhe, kichu bole na. "Ahaaaaaa, ber korechi na thik thik, dekhechish agei bolechilam amar buddhi tor cheye onek beshi" jore jore bolte thake ranu.

Odike dekhe Ma, mashima ar bhabi ki jeno kotha bolche nijera nijera....ora egiye jetei bole bhabi...ranu, tui ar kona ektu upore ja to, amra ekta joruri kotha bolchi ekhane. Haat dhore Kona ke upore niye ashe ranu, "ki hocche ta ki shuni?" bole uthe Kona. Hihi kore heshe uthe ranu, ebar kothai jabi tui shuni? khali eto din amakei jaliyechish na? ebar ami o jalabo toke!!!!!! Oneeeeek jalabo!

Ami bhabi ke bole diyechi tor ar chota da'r kotha, bhabi o boleche oneeek manabe toder du to ke. "jaah, ki shuru korli tora? Protik da amake pochondo korbe keno? Ami ki bhabi'r moto shundor,?" bole Kona. "ooooooo, tar mane apni puroi dube gechen dekhi" bole khil khil kore hashte thake ranu. " ar ekta kothao bolchi na tor sathe dara" bole raag kore Kona. "Aha mukhti dekhechish nijer? Puro laal hoye ekdom fete jabi to" bole abar hashte thake ranu. "dekhhh, bhalo hobe na bolchi ranu" prai kede fele Kona. "onek bhalobashish chota da ke na re? Etto din tobe kichui bolish ni keno mukhpuri? "jani na re, amar khali kanna pai protik da ke dekhle." bole chup kore thake Kona, chokher kon vije othe taar. "hoyeche hoyche, ekhon hashir shomoi, kanna kati bondho kor!" Bole jihba dekhai ranu kona ke. Ebhabei khunshuti cholte thake dui bandhobir.

Dupur perie bikel ashtei kemon jani hotat kore bodle jai bashar poribesh. Baba bole je ora naki guli chaliyeche kothai jeno, onek chatro mara geche, oneker kono khoj nai. Ek nimishey shob hashi thatta ube jai kothai jeno. Ek kalo chaya jeno abar eshe vor kore tader bashai, boro da choto da karor e kono khoj nei tokhono. Bikel sesh hoye shondha ghoniye ashe, hotat kore shuru hoi onek kola hol kara jeno onek jore jore slogan dite dite asche boro rastar dik theke....

"Tomar bhasha amar bhasha...
a mori bangla bhasha..."

Gom gom kore uthe puro elaka ta oder slogan e...aste aste kome jai slogan. Chole jai bishal ek michil oder bashar pash diye, voye uttejonai gayer rom darie jai ranu'r. ki hoyeche oder, etto manush keno aaj? Fish fish kore kotha bole ma ar mashima, uddege kalo hoye thaka mukh gulo dekhe khub koshto hote thake ranu'r. Chota da tao je ki, aaj na gele ki hoto? one raag uthe taar protik er upor. Ektu por abar shona jai arekta choto michil er awaz, kintu era onek chup chap..aste aste egiye ashte thake..ondhokar er moddhe dekhe ranu ekta thela gari moto eshe thame oder gate er bahire, bishfarito chokhey dekhte thake ranu oder ke, dhora dhori kore ki jeno boye niye ashe ora vitore...doure niche neme jai ranu ar kona...giye dekhe shobai uthone neme esheche...keno jeno ekta odbhut betha onubhob kore ranu, ki ek ashongkhai vore uthe mon. aste aste egiye jai ora shobai dekhe kapor diye dhaka ki jeno boye ene rakhlo koek ta chele, are oi to elakar harun da ar mollik, aro ke ke jeno ache chehara bujhe uthte pare na ranu...chota da ta koi gelo? or to harun da'r sathei firar kotha versity theke. Choto da koi harun da? bole uthe ranu. Kichu bole na ora, shobai chup kore dariye thake....maa doure egiye jai, ki holo harun, kotha bolcho na keno baba, protik kothai? Tao kichu bole na keu, chup kore takiye thake kapor dhaka jinish gulor dike. Baba egiye jai hotat ar bole uthe egulo ki baba? ki egulo? bolte bolte kapor ta shoriye dei baba...oshfut ekta awaz kore dhole pore ma okhanei, buk fata artonaad kore uthe Kona, dhore rakhte pare na okey mashima ar bhabi...giye jhapiye pore o manush tar buke...ki jeno bolte thake fish fish kore...kintu keu ki shunche tar kotha? Oi to shuye ache ranu'r choto da, chot fote torun, versity'r final year er chatro Protik ar or bondhu rofiq da. "Michil er samne chilo ora jokhon open fire kore pakistanira" bole uthe harun da aste aste, kintu kichui kaan e jai na ranu'r. ki shundor lagche choto da ke bhabe dariye dariye ranu, oito laal rong mekhe shuye ache chotta, ki jeno ekta obakto koshto eshe golar kache atke thake taar, pare na shey kadte, chup kore takiye thake tar prio choto da ke, jaar gaan shunlei tar gaye kata dito, ar kono din gaibe na choto da kono gaan, kono din tanbe na tar chul dhore..tibro koshte bukta te kemon jani kore uthe ranu'r...chokh beye porte thake lona jol.....

Emoni kore pran diyeche amader desh er damal chele ra, jara karo bhai, karo shami, karo priyojon kingba karo adorer shontan,
diyeche pran amader mayer bhasha ke rokkha korar jonno, diyeche pran protibaad korte giye bhasha kere neya procheshtar biruddhe,
hariye geche tara jibon theke chiro tore, tobu o Omor tara amader majhe, amader bhashar majhe,
jonmo jonmantore amader banglar majhe......

"Amar bhai er rokte rangano Ekhushey February.....
Ami ki bhuli te pari......
Chele hara shoto maa er osru jhora February...
Ami ki bhuli te pari..."

**tamchow** · February 24th, 2008, 11:00 PM

bhalo korecho tumi eita onno threade post korecho... karon khubi bhalo legeche pore.. really emotional...

noble · February 24th, 2008, 11:03 PM

Good one rono

**Prova** · February 25th, 2008, 10:47 AM

WoW, ronoh!!! Amar chokhe pani chole ashchilo!!...really nice!!

ronohungkar · February 25th, 2008, 10:38 PM

Thank you tammy, noble and prova! Thanks a lot. Well I'm happy that you guys made it till the end, cuz its soo long!

Likhar shomoi bujhini eto boro hoye geche! Lol!

**afsana911** · February 26th, 2008, 12:57 AM

etto boro! prothom baar pore thanks dilam karon porte eto bhalo lagse je reply korte monechilo na.. lol.
but really, really nice!!! write more.. but not so long..

**mina** · February 26th, 2008, 01:14 PM

ami koyekbar ki likhbo bujhe utte parchilam na. ekhono parchina...

**afsana911** · February 28th, 2008, 01:04 AM

lol. mina.. i think that explains how touching the story is!

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