You And I

LuiTsean · February 1st, 2007, 07:22 PM

Today

Running at the field of clock sun is going to set
Mirror is the only companion when nobody is to wait
After passing these long years the life is feeling wounded
My mind turns the time at those moments which i always wanted
Today I am feeling you very much than ever
Nobody no friend only the mirror is just here.

Soft and sad tones are moulding in the guiter
Smiling, it says why would you be fool your friend is still there
It says, tour foolishness made you alone
Why do you think that everybody's gone?
The mirror with the time stops on sudden
I, on the mirror is not there, its all broken......

Today I really feel you very much but I am not here.......waiting over there wehre everyone is alone and time is a just where it started....

**BoIRaGi** · February 1st, 2007, 07:28 PM

SAD ....... but Nice poem ....... cheer up man ......... change ur sub ..... we wanna to c u happy

LuiTsean · February 1st, 2007, 07:35 PM

i m happppy buddy but my poems and songs are always this kind...i dont know why.....and thx for readin BOIRAGI bhaiii...apnar namtao to besh dukkhi dukkhi kind

**BoIRaGi** · February 1st, 2007, 07:47 PM

ami vaber duniar BoIRaGi bro .......... lolzzz

dekho bro ...... kobira kintu kono backgroung chara poem likhe na ......... so tumi jodi happ guy how tobe seta tomake tomar poem diyeY prove korte hobe

nirvoye_nilakas · February 1st, 2007, 08:10 PM

khub valo laglo.asif er ekta gaan mone porse,
""tumar chiti pore,
gothokal raate,
eka eka kedhesi nirobe"

asolei valo legese ,aro likhben ei prottasay.........

**Rayan** · February 1st, 2007, 08:15 PM

Nice one bro nice one

**Rio** · February 1st, 2007, 10:27 PM

i like all kind of poems.thanks bro for share with us.keep posting.

**tanna** · 05:00 AM

WOW another great poem !!!

but like BOIRAGI said, we await a more cheery work next time :P

and hey register for the poem competition being held here at doshomik (english poems too)

here's the link
http://www.doshomik.net/dustbin/regi...tion-3-a-5554/

LuiTsean · February 2nd, 2007, 12:29 PM

well thx tanna bro for the invitation...but i dont like competition....i do all this for myself and then found the forum and thus sharin with all of u.....nothin more....and its my plsure tht u buddies really liked my poems....really i dont mean n3 kind of comp....

Asmani · February 3rd, 2007, 02:17 AM

nice work.
writing poem is a natural talent. To me, When poets enter a contest, they don't mean to compete against others. They enter because they want to see how well their message in poems has been recieved by readers.

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