For You

LuiTsean · February 2nd, 2007, 12:40 PM

For you

For you, faint light from azure stars
Dark black color of dawn because of night
After mixing copse rose's white
I remember sky blue is your favorite.

For you, all thinkings of mine
Lynching at rose branch, as red as fire
A flash of sunlight, again sky full of stars
Water garlanded soil makes me mad.

For you, surrounding all my thinking's
So many sleepless nights
Staring at you comparing with stars
Love bird widens its mind baring wing
.....For you........

**Rayan** · February 2nd, 2007, 12:45 PM

NIce one nice one Lui

very good job and keep it uppppppp

**Rio** · February 2nd, 2007, 01:04 PM

For you, all thinkings of mine
Lynching at rose branch, as red as fire

cool lines cose i like rose so much and this line is awesome thanks bro.

**Prova** · February 2nd, 2007, 07:58 PM

WoW......Awesome Poem!..SweeT..

**BoIRaGi** · February 2nd, 2007, 10:43 PM

Voyonkor Sundor poem bro ..... tnkx for sharing

For you, all thinkings of mine
Lynching at rose branch, as red as fire

**tanna** · February 5th, 2007, 02:00 PM

oh man i love ur poems

keep it up

a piece of advice: use colour tht is more readable, cos light blue with tht white background is really hard to read, and i got s*ucky eyes

thanku again