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Default To wonderland, Posted February 12th, 2007, 02:36 AM #1 (permalink) |
My eyes are slowly closing,
Gently tripping over the clouds,
Am I in Heaven?
Sure feels like it.
No guilt. No hatred. No sounds.
No sounds?
Does that mean no emotions?
I tap on my chest just to see.
I realise I have no heartbeat.
What the hell is happening to me?
I look down at my feet,
I'm flying,
My feet aren't touching the floor,
I glace at my arms,
I'm flying,
I'm seriously starting to soar.
I love you,
My darling angel,
You've given me so much more,
Than I could wish for.
I've got my wings now,
So pretty and pink,
I knew they'd get here some day,
And it's all thanks to you, my sweet,
Now let's fly...
Up, up and away,
The pink sky looks beautiful from here,
Doesn't it?
Come on and take my hand,
Away together we'll fly,
To Wonderland.
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 02:42 AM #2 (permalink) |
OMG ........ u got an awesome imagination .......... mind blowing poem dear ..... tnkx again for sharing dis wonderful poem
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 02:50 AM #3 (permalink) |
My dreams are my imaginations i only write what im feeling at that time and where my imagination takes meh

Your coments are always nice to see.
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What can i say more
your Poems Always Touches my heart
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 11:59 AM #6 (permalink) |
Awesome poem hehe Boiragi mamu become ur fan now dosto like me hehe coolli.
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