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Default Without you, Posted January 22nd, 2007, 11:49 PM #1 (permalink) |
without you ..nothing is worthwhile
i agree , everthing is nice and beautiful
i dont understand,whats goin on
i have u in my heart
yet my heart is in torment
why is my heart restive every moment,
why do i always feel,
i am missing something
without you ..nothing is worthwhile
come and again break my heart
come and again leave me in tears,
come again from somewhere..
u r the one who gave me this pain.
only ur face is in my eyes now
like u ur pain is also very beautiful.
without you ..nothing is worthwhile
whereever my eyes go,whereever my eyes look.
the eyes mad in ur love,is in search of u
i am alive , but where is life
My life where have u gone..
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Default Posted January 22nd, 2007, 11:53 PM #2 (permalink) |
NIce one alice

Good jooob
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Default Posted January 23rd, 2007, 12:35 AM #3 (permalink) |
without you ..nothing is worthwhile
come and again break my heart
come and again leave me in tears,
come again from somewhere..

this line really make me feel, good poem once again friend.
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Default Posted January 23rd, 2007, 12:37 AM #4 (permalink) |
thenks for ur comments

Rio call me katie :P
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Default Posted January 23rd, 2007, 06:43 AM #5 (permalink) |
OMG ..... it touched to ma heart directly AliCe .......... tnkx for sharing dis wonderful poem ........ tnkw a lott
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Default Posted January 23rd, 2007, 07:11 AM #6 (permalink) |
What everyone is saying i hope its the truth Its really good but not as a poem.. only half way it sounds like a poem and rest like a letter. Why are you begging anyway
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Default Posted January 23rd, 2007, 02:41 PM #7 (permalink) |
wow great poem , and it is a great poem, i dont know wht MASKED MAN is talking about

very touching poem ALICE, keep it up and thnkx for sharing too

p.s. hope the poem doesnt reflect where u stand on stuff and if it does, good luck to u on tht too :P
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