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Default Why, Posted July 22nd, 2008, 05:28 AM #1 (permalink) |
As night passes by, I try to forget you
and try to move on, but every time I close my eyes,
I see your face. I can see your sweet smile.
I can hear your laughter.
I try to move on, but there is something that is holding me back.
Looking up in the sky, I'm trying to see a face,
a face that appears and fades away. Who could it be?
You? Or, is it my prince that will come with a horse,
and take me away?
Why is it every time I walk,
I can feel as if someone is walking beside me...
Why can I feel you holding me
even though I can't see you?
Why is it hard to move on without you being there for me?
Why does my heart feels so empty after you had left me?
Why do I eagerly wait for you to come back to me?
At night, I can hear you whispering.
I can feel you holding me in your arms, but why can't I see you?
Have you really left me, and the world behind?
What happen to the promise of you coming back to me
?
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Default Posted July 22nd, 2008, 05:50 AM #2 (permalink) |
Awwww so sad!!!! really!!! i was thinking bout someone when i was readin your poem!! and almost brought tears to my eyes!! thanks for sharing!!!.....u r a great writer!!!
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superb.....bhalo likhish r o likhte thak ebon asha kori vhobisshote r o porte parbo
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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Default Posted July 22nd, 2008, 08:48 PM #6 (permalink) |
nice poem about love . thanks for share.
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