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Default we live, Posted February 19th, 2007, 06:19 AM #1 (permalink) |
I'm standing on the bridge,
In nothing but the rain,
And your old, black coat to keep me warm.
I've been gone for weeks,
You wouldn't know,
Searching for a place,
To call 'home'.
I tried to get you to come,
Because nobody likes to be alone.
You wouldn't come.
The silence, if it could,
Would break my heart,
I laugh as I cry.
Raindrops fall from the sky,
Mixing with my tears,
Turning to pearls as they hit the ground.
Everything I worked so hard for; gone.
How do I turn it all around?
We get tangled up in our webs of dreams,
Wonder where our reality went.
There's an Oxfam down the road,
I just want to hide.
I swallow my pride.
We die to live
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Default Posted February 19th, 2007, 08:41 AM #2 (permalink) |
I tried to get you to come,
Because nobody likes to be alone.

You wouldn't come.
The silence, if it could,
Would break my heart,



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Default Posted February 19th, 2007, 12:25 PM #3 (permalink) |
Katie owo awesome poem really really good one, owo i like its every line. thanks yer for share with us.
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Default Posted February 19th, 2007, 02:15 PM #4 (permalink) |
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Default Posted February 19th, 2007, 07:34 PM #5 (permalink) |

HAHAHAHA the first tow lines Reminded me AVril Lavigne Im with U
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