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Default Warm up for poetry tourny, Posted November 3rd, 2007, 01:28 PM #1 (permalink) |
Okay Lets get warmed up before we hit the tourny guys.. So in this thread The next poster has to write 4 lines poem about the topic the previous poster left..


Rules:

1. Don't get anyone offended by any criticize them.. If you do do iton your own risk..

2. Please don't make comment about anyones poem here in this thread.. Just inspire them..

3. Make sure you follow the topic.. and write your poem in 4 lines.. not more or less.

Okay heres the Topic for the Next one "Shoishob" "Childhood"

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Default Posted November 3rd, 2007, 01:41 PM #2 (permalink) |
shoishaber kotha beshi mone pore na
shudhu mone pore aam kuratam vhor dupure
ar mone pore fele asha sai bondhuder
jader sate din- vhor karto amude..



next.."vholo laga"
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Default Posted November 3rd, 2007, 09:04 PM #3 (permalink) |
When i was young and not bothred
life was so much better,
now i am old and bothered
happiness is locked up in my old fashioned cupboard!

Lolll....

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Default Posted November 3rd, 2007, 09:43 PM #4 (permalink) |
fake ppl around da world
neither me nor you R!! lolz
but some ppl around are
who does us bother...

next>>>shopno gulo
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Default Posted November 4th, 2007, 01:32 AM #5 (permalink) |
Slow, winding wind gushing through thy hills,
a night of solitude just you n me,
Shadows casted by thy half sized Luna,
makes me wonder; is it real or is it just a dream?





PS: I have no idea of what the crap i just typed!



Yikes! Tai to! Thanks Sadi!


Nobo din (A brand new day)
I live in a world beyond your world....

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Default Posted November 4th, 2007, 03:28 AM #6 (permalink) |
I long for that day, where I can walk outside and truly feel free
A day where I can walk down the streets, and not feel incomplete
Visit any neighborhood and not have to watch my steps, Be able to carry myself like the king I was meant to be
Not have to walk with uncertainty, scared someone is stalking me


nxt: (a eazy one but subj's bullshi* ) love n Infatuation.

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Default Posted November 4th, 2007, 05:44 PM #7 (permalink) |
i guess the night was young
you looked pretty
i had one too many beers
to think you are my betty..


next: sickness..
Are you still selling those butterflies?
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Default Posted November 4th, 2007, 06:57 PM #8 (permalink) |
make me cry, make me sad
because of sick-ness...
alwaya run, alwaya escap
from the other side of happy-ness





next....broken heart
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Default Posted November 4th, 2007, 10:15 PM #9 (permalink) |
U can see the tears on crying , u can feel the pain
but
nobody knows whats the pain,nobody see the tears
Of a broken heart

Next :- Fear
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Default Posted November 5th, 2007, 09:00 AM #10 (permalink) |
oh dear ...... vhoy peona ney kono badha
dont be fear...... asho hat dhore kori protigga
i m here ...... samne ache onekkk protasha
wipe ur tear........ tai bole theme jabe ki potho chola?

next>>>precious
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