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Default Valobasa kare koi 2 !!!!! ???, Posted October 16th, 2007, 08:27 PM #1 (permalink) |
Valobasa kare koi 2 !!!!! ???

tomake ki onubhob kora jaay?
aami tomar shubashe ridoy rangai...
tomar hashite baar baar jonmai...
ronger aachore nijeke shajai....
jonaki poka ke chupi chupi boli...
she aashbe...oboshshoi aashbe...
tobou tomar dekha nei...
nirjonotay aabar nijeke kadai...

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Default Posted October 17th, 2007, 07:34 AM #2 (permalink) |
nice poem..
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Default Posted October 21st, 2007, 02:26 PM #3 (permalink) |
boroi shundor kobita ti pichone nishchoi ekjon ache ja chuwar bahire tai na?
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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Default Posted October 21st, 2007, 02:40 PM #4 (permalink) |
Valobasher moto pagla pani khaite chai naa, not a bit more. erbar khaichilam.....uuni amar pet (stomach) theke sob pagla pani (dhong er valobashaa) ber kore dite darun help kore chileen. er naa......chaira de maa kainda bachi. it waz havenly (wired though) but after 1 month its became rubbish. it wud almost ave myd ma lyf hell...ruined.

btwz wonderful poem man. really touchy.......

Ŵe čơme 2 ЃΘΛξ ήoT βy fϊήδϊnG ά pЁЯfξςT Person, bΰt βy ЃέaЯήϊnG 2 sέe aή ϊmpέЯfЁcT pξЯsόή pЁЯfξςTЃy.
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Default Posted October 21st, 2007, 03:19 PM #5 (permalink) |
khub sundor..better than v1



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