tumi Amar

nirvoye_nilakas · January 26th, 2007, 07:24 AM

amagor BOIRAGI bhai amake ekta prosno koresilen,
question="tumi sob somoy mora mora subject niye keno kobitha likho?"

answer=asole kheyal korinai j kebol eki rokom kobitha diye jachchi.

aanonder kobitha,funny kobitha o lekhar bertho chesta kori ami.ei ekta dilam...
(funny kobitha likhthe hole ekjon bondhur proyujon jodhi apni raji thaken tho ami funny kobitha dewar saddo mothochesta korbo)

no-01

:::::::::::::TUMI AMAR:::::::::::

tumi rupali juchona hoye
deka dhiyecho ei choke.
tumi rongdonu hoye gor bedhecho
nilakaseri buke.

tumi nouka hoye paal tulecho
ami dew kelano nodithe.
tumi maji hoye dorecho haal
amar jibon thorithe

tumi sisir hoye joreso rathe
ami sobuj gaser upor.
jokon katchilem sathar digir jole
tumi chile vor dhupor

tumar dake amar goom vange
tumi goom vangano paki
tumay deki mugdho hoye
tumi horiner cholo cholo aaki.

ekdin jodhi na deki tumay
mone hoy dekini kothota bochor
amar moner moni kutay
tumi vedheso suker basor

**Rayan** · January 26th, 2007, 01:20 PM

haha Nice NIce Bro good job

keep it up

lawman4all · January 26th, 2007, 04:13 PM

nice poem..now u proved u can bring different flavor in ur writings

nirvoye_nilakas · January 26th, 2007, 07:35 PM

rayan ahmed o lawman4all apnader donnobad.apnader uthsaho e amake kobitha likhar uthprerona debe.

**Rio** · January 26th, 2007, 08:45 PM

Yep Lawman mama 100% right owo ur truly a good writer who can write in any sub. Bro keep going we r all with u.

nirvoye_nilakas · January 29th, 2007, 07:50 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by Rio
	Yep Lawman mama 100% right owo ur truly a good writer who can write in any sub. Bro keep going we r all with u.

thnaks,janina kemon likhi thobe valo lekhar chesta kori.

**BoIRaGi** · January 29th, 2007, 07:56 PM

wow ........ Marattok poem bro ........... yess !!!! U did it bro ...... tnkx for sharing .........

nirvoye_nilakas · February 4th, 2007, 08:04 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by BoIRaGi
	wow ........ Marattok poem bro ........... yess !!!! U did it bro ...... tnkx for sharing .........

drur miah chapa ektu kom maren,ami kinthu jani j amar lekha dekhlei apnar birokthi lage

**Prova** · February 5th, 2007, 12:51 AM

Wow...eto joldi eto shundor kemne likho?..Nice Work Done

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