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Question Trying to forget you, Posted July 1st, 2007, 10:57 PM #1 (permalink) |
Trying to forget your name
but everything keeps reminding me of you
sorry you don't love me nomore
sorry you don't have anything left to say
miss you so bad
why do you suddenly hate me after all this time
we had so much, but really i no why
it was my fault i hurt you and you walked away
things faded
it all fadded away from one day to another
i want everything to go back like it was
when i was happy
it was almost to perfect
i guess i did wrong again
since you blamed it all on me
i hate you for letting go and forgeting me
i hate you for all the things you made me beleive in
all those promisses meant nothing to you
that i would never loose you
its too late now
whats gone is gone
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Default Posted July 2nd, 2007, 12:51 AM #2 (permalink) |
liked the theme but the wording not quite as much
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Default Posted July 2nd, 2007, 03:45 AM #3 (permalink) |
gud poem wid easy n symple way . i lyk dis kinda poem bcoz i don understand poems but simple poems with much touchy feelings........dis's just simply best. thanx aLice thank u very much .

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Default Posted July 2nd, 2007, 05:11 AM #4 (permalink) |
dat poem is really touchy.. i like da diff phases.. at da end of it u feel like sayin I WILL SURVIVE...

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Default Posted July 2nd, 2007, 07:49 PM #5 (permalink) |
really a nice poem dosto. good job.
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Default Posted July 2nd, 2007, 08:06 PM #6 (permalink) |


Trying to forget your name
but everything keeps reminding me of you
sorry you don't love me nomore
sorry you don't have anything left to say
miss you so bad


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Default Posted July 3rd, 2007, 05:21 AM #7 (permalink) |
nice theme....keep writing!
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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Default Posted July 7th, 2007, 04:04 AM #8 (permalink) |
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
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Default Posted October 30th, 2008, 11:01 PM #9 (permalink) |
age shudu kobita chilo...ekhon shotti rup dilo...
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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