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Default Tomar Ichche ke Mene Niye, Posted November 2nd, 2005, 06:55 PM #1 (permalink) |
Ami jani na eita kaar lekha, but shundor
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Tomar iccha k mene niye j raat e tomar jibon theke ami chole jabo,
se raat e achomka aakash cheye jabe ondhokar megh e,
voyonkor jhor-brishti hobe,
jole vore uthbe tomar samner oi jheel ta.
biddut chomkabe ghono ghono.
r, sei bidduter aloy icchar biruddheao tumi dekhte pabe
amar chole jawa.
r, jheeler jole tumi barbar dekhte pabe, amar noy,
tomar nijeri sundoor duti chokh,
sundoor asru te veja.
haater isharai pechon theke tumi amake ferate chaiteao paro!
kintu amito tokhon khucchi hariye jabar poth!!
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Default Posted November 2nd, 2005, 08:35 PM #2 (permalink) |
valo kobita... kintu "taal" nya porte parini.. kintu ei ta shotti kobita`r kotha gula shundor..!






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Default Posted November 2nd, 2005, 08:55 PM #3 (permalink) |
wow...... khub e josh ekta poem. i like this poem.
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Default Posted November 13th, 2005, 06:44 AM #4 (permalink) |
jubair ..... hmm.... khub beshi shundor...so..
abaro deep jele jai...
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Default Posted December 7th, 2005, 06:51 PM #5 (permalink) |
Ei niye duibar porlam kobita ta.
Jubi bhiyaaaaaaaaa ar kobita koi?
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