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Lightbulb **** sob harano ami****, Posted August 4th, 2007, 08:27 PM #1 (permalink) |
*** sob harano ami ***


path harano potik ami,
kool harano maji.
hoyesi suvash bihin ful,
aain vula kaji.

dew harano nodi ami,
ami nouko bihin kheya.
shopno harano,sriti ami,
ami roudro bihin dhupor.

dangay uta mach ami,
rong bihin kono chobi.
mrito jorna ami paharer gaye,
ami chondo harano kobi.

shishir harano sither voor,
megh bihin vorshar akash.
ami joro hawa khoner gudhuli,
roop harano nodi tirer kash.

hashi harano gayer bodhu,
alo bihin besto shohor.
shopno vula jantrik manob ami.
ami othite paa rakh prohor.

sob hariye nissho ami,
ami nissher cheyeo nissho.
obak hoye nijeke khuje firi,
ami chiro sobuj harano bissho.


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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।
চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।
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Default Posted August 5th, 2007, 02:22 AM #2 (permalink) |
ekta kobita lekha shukhi ami , abar dekhi sob harano pothik ............ kahini ki bro ? ...... lol !!!

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Default Posted August 5th, 2007, 03:54 AM #3 (permalink) |
Another great poem.. really nice.. but kinda sad
Learning To Breathe
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Lightbulb Posted August 11th, 2007, 07:48 PM #4 (permalink) |
osabdhanothay kobitar maje 4 line dewa hoyni,choke poray ekhon dilam.ekhon r chonde gormil nei monehoy
*** sob harano ami ***



path harano potik ami,
kool harano maji.
hoyesi suvash bihin ful,
aain vula kaji.

dew harano nodi ami,
ami nouko bihin kheya.
shopno harano sriti ami,
ppran bihin domka hawa.

bashi bihin rakhal ami
ami jol harano pukoor.
shopno harano,sriti ami,
ami roudro bihin dhupor.

dangay uta mach ami,
rong bihin kono chobi.
mrito jorna ami paharer gaye,
ami chondo harano kobi.

shishir harano sither voor,
megh bihin vorshar akash.
ami joro hawa khoner gudhuli,
roop harano nodi tirer kash.

hashi harano gayer bodhu,
alo bihin besto shohor.
shopno vula jantrik manob ami.
ami othite paa rakh prohor.

sob hariye nissho ami,
ami nissher cheyeo nissho.
obak hoye nijeke khuje firi,
ami chiro sobuj harano bissho.


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তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।
চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।
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Default Posted August 12th, 2007, 12:46 AM #5 (permalink) |
tomar kobitar chonder proyojon ai brO ..... shobder majhe lukiye thake tomar mone kotha gulo ....... tnkx again bro !!!

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Default Posted August 17th, 2007, 12:32 PM #6 (permalink) |
onekdin por tor kobita porar sujog pelam. onek bhalo laglo...
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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