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This is a discussion on Shopoth Nilam Mago within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; এক ফাগুন, দুই ফাগুন, বত্রিশ ফাগুন পেরিয়ে, এদেশ-ওদেশ ঘুরে, সাত মহাদেশ বেরিয়ে। অবশেষে দাঁড়ালাম, বাংলার এই প্রান্তরে, বাংলা আমার মা জননী, মা আমার আজ শ্রান্ত রে। শ্রান্ত মায়ের চোখের জলে ...

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Lightbulb Shopoth Nilam Mago, Posted March 31st, 2008, 10:35 AM #1 (permalink) |
এক ফাগুন, দুই ফাগুন, বত্রিশ ফাগুন পেরিয়ে,

এদেশ-ওদেশ ঘুরে, সাত মহাদেশ বেরিয়ে।

অবশেষে দাঁড়ালাম, বাংলার এই প্রান্তরে,

বাংলা আমার মা জননী, মা আমার আজ শ্রান্ত রে।


শ্রান্ত মায়ের চোখের জলে

বানে ভাঙ্গে নদীর দুকুল,

দীর্ঘশ্বাসের ঝড়ে মাগো

ঝরছে তাজা আমের মুকুল।


হাহুতাশের রাজনীতিতে মা তুই

দুর্নীতিতে ভরা,

বেকার ছেলের অভিশাপে মা

ধরেছে দেহে তোর জড়া।


পিপাসাতে যখন দেখি

মরুভূমি তোর মুখে

ভাবি, ফারাককা বাঁধ উড়িয়ে দেবো

বোমা বেঁধেছি বুকে।


ফাঁকি যদি দেয় তোকে ফের

কোনও শুভংকর

শত বাঁধা ছিন্ন করে

হব ভয়ংকর।


হায়েনার দল সাবধান হ....

বাড়াসনে আর থাবা,

শপথ নিলাম রক্ত দেবো

যেমন, দিয়েছিল বাবা।
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Default Posted April 1st, 2008, 06:57 PM #2 (permalink) |
apnar ei lekhata amar kache osomvob valo legese.

*apnar lekha kobita gulur maje etai best(amar dristite)

ekta onurudh,"ei kobita take darabahik kora jayna."
hazaro upoma diye prothima ghorben ei thread a.

thanks dilamna
আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted April 2nd, 2008, 08:21 PM #4 (permalink) |
Very nice poem.
post moreeee.
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