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Default shershamsher, Posted January 29th, 2008, 03:51 AM #1 (permalink) |
ekti premer chitti likithey ki proyojon
kagaoj kolom ar onek savar
na kagoj kolom chara shudu thar ekti chuker ishara ja buje thar priojon
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Default Posted January 30th, 2008, 12:16 AM #2 (permalink) |
savar= patience ?
good start.. aar ektu lomba koren
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Default Posted January 30th, 2008, 12:21 AM #3 (permalink) |
Savar?
Cant get this.
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Default Posted January 30th, 2008, 06:38 AM #4 (permalink) |

asmani api ur rite...savar mane dhorjo...
hmmmm baki line gulo ki add korben....???

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
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Default Posted January 30th, 2008, 07:40 PM #5 (permalink) |
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ekti premer chitti likithey ki proyojon
kagaoj kolom ar onek savar
na kagoj kolom chara shudu thar ekti chuker ishara ja buje thar priojon
ekti premer chittithey aro ki jeno lage
Fanatic fantasy ek fashionic anuragey
Shabeki oithijey poribeshon
Ekti premer chitti likithey ektu grinnar o ki proyojon

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savar= patience ?
good start.. aar ektu lomba koren
DONNO BAD shudu ekto lamba korlam
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asmani api ur rite...savar mane dhorjo...
hmmmm baki line gulo ki add korben....???
Ekti Premer chitti likithey aro ki jeno baki roy
Poga Koy

Ekti premer chitti likithey lage ek foota shukro
Ea jeno ek gulok dhaday Siratul Mustaqim hoye jaay bokro
Kottin premer punno kamorey brosta holey naki hey lojjabathi lotha
Ekti premer chitti likithey lage ekti BALOBASHAR kotha
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Default Posted January 31st, 2008, 11:59 PM #7 (permalink) |
apni wording gulo gondogol....apni bhalo likhte paren...faizlami na kore shundor kore likhle ki hoi?

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
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Default Posted February 1st, 2008, 12:49 AM #8 (permalink) |
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apni wording gulo gondogol....apni bhalo likhte paren...faizlami na kore shundor kore likhle ki hoi?
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ei gulo ek urdu mehfill ey chillo
[b]asha kori aponader balo lagbey
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By Poga Humayun Dundiwala

Kolom jitney ke liye
Kismat nahi Karamath chahi ye
Peyar jitney ke liye
Pasina nahi Pasand chahi ye

Kalam sunney ke liye
Kheyal nahi Khabbar chahi ye
Peyar sunney ke liye
Pasina nahi Pukar chahi ye

Poga Say's in a foolington Maze

Peyar se milli akhon mey pani
Naftrath se milli dil pe aag
Is peyar our nafrath ki jung mey
Main na dost raha na dushman
Main bangeya hu ek Bairaag
Ab is Bairaag ko Mullah Kaffir kahe Sanyasi kahe Fakir
Bairaag kahe ab main main na raha
Jub tum na raho ge tum tab faisala karega hamara taqdeer ka laqeer

Kolom samajney ke liye
Taqat nahi Talim chahi ye
Peyar samajne ke liye
Pehli nahi Pehchan chahi ye

Mrs Be Aql Khan Usta : Ek likney ke liye chahiye sirf ek kolom
Aur Kagaj uski Mehbooba aur Kali uski priatham
Ek love letter likeny key liye aur kuch nahi chaiye Zeyada
Jo Bole oh Krisnah Jo sunne oh Radah
Phir bi oh love letter aise lage zayse nafrath ki dastabez por haram ki abadi
Ek love letter likeny ke liye chahiye ek SHARITAH ki shadi

Mr Barzakh Fitrath Ullah : Ek love letter likne ke liye kia chahi ye
Kagaz Kolom aur bahuth savar
Ya na kagaz na kolom sirf thora si unki ek nazar
Ek love letter likne ke liye aur kuch chahi ye zeyada
Be Zaban ansoo se lika ek dil ka wadah
Fir bi love letter aysa lage
Zeyse kuch na hua bayan
Ek love letter likna hai bilkul asan
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Default Posted February 1st, 2008, 04:29 AM #9 (permalink) |
so what do u exactly do ?
could you introduce urself please ?
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Default Posted February 1st, 2008, 02:02 PM #10 (permalink) |
khichuri.........



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