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Lightbulb *** shahjadhir valobasha***, Posted October 18th, 2007, 09:53 PM #1 (permalink) |
***shahjadhir valobasha***

oi char dewaler maje pran ache,
vabini age,kokhono vabini.
sath sagorer jol-a sukher eto dew hobe,
na go na,bujini agee, buji.
tumi sotho jonomer shopno hole,hole hridoy rani.
tumi sotho kuti pritibi shomo bishuddho mukhto-moni.

srabon masher purnima thithi,
mon-a ki pore she gaan,she rakhi bondon.
orkid er chayay,aayotho noyona tumi,
shopner jal bunesile,tumi shusuvon.
hath a paye aaj luhar shikol porano,
tobu amar hridoy shikol tumate jorano.

shahjadhi tumay valobeshechi
tai ora amay rajdruhi bole.
rajbondi kore rekhese kobei.
aaj bondhi hoyesi valobashar fole.
tobu jeno rekho,amar udhashi jibon,
nijer ojantei tumake shope diyese mon.

amar jonno shunechi ronorongini hoyeso,
a jibone amar r kieba chaibar ache.
ami fashir monche daraye chithkare bolbo,
"ore a jibone madhobi lota futeni miche"
moroneo amar joy hobe,tumar valobasha dey prerona.
o pare j hobe amar rani,amar shurangona.

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amar kobitar shundor shundor reply jara diyesen,tader maje "Reev" ekjon.ei kobita ta amar lekha holeo ,eta amar khub beshi prio.ami oboshor pelei ei kobitay onthotho ekbar hole pore dekhi.asha kori apnaro valo lagbe............nirvoye_nilakas
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তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

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সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 18th, 2007, 10:13 PM #2 (permalink) |
Wow Really nice and so romantic and touchy also ...... Shotti khub shundor hoeyeche specially last para ta shotti touchyyyy


"amar jonno shunechi ronorongini hoyeso,
a jibone amar r kieba chaibar ache.
ami fashir monche daraye chithkare bolbo,
"ore a jibone madhobi lota futeni miche"
moroneo amar joy hobe,tumar valobasha dey prerona.
o pare j hobe amar rani,amar shurangona."

wahhh..............................



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Default Posted October 19th, 2007, 12:13 AM #3 (permalink) |
really nice one .............. reev better tnkx u more den twice for this wonderful poem
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Default Posted October 19th, 2007, 07:25 AM #4 (permalink) |
ahh... another nice poem.. thanks. real nice.
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Default Posted November 3rd, 2007, 12:16 AM #5 (permalink) |
Amader Reev koi....??

kichu kichu shobdho jodio kobitar manan soho kina bujlam na...tobe overall is good..

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Default Posted November 3rd, 2007, 12:27 AM #6 (permalink) |
Nice peom bro.
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Default Posted April 20th, 2008, 09:30 PM #7 (permalink) |
kobita ta jakei dilam,thinie porlenna.

reev bhaiyer kache kobita ta valo lageni mone hoy
আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
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