Paka dhane tor, porlore ki moi?
Bara vate ki sai?
Amonti issa, silona kokhono,
Sunre boro (/soto) vai
Ghat hoese, maf cheyesi,
R korishna man
Khot dilam, ai nakete amar,
R dhorilam kan (Tor? na na amar amar)
Aj vule ja, tor k j dushmon
Hat mela, ai hate
Sehrir age, likhesi eta
Romjaner ai rate
Bash baganer mathar upor
Chad uthibe oi
Eider age uthle sheta
Khushite hoi choi
Chaile she chad, ene debo
Ram gorurer sana
Chader hashi badh vangibe
Thambe? nana nana (hashi passé nishchoi?)
Bujhli Bhaia kamon mojar
Sondo ami pushi
Shokol srom pondo hobe
Na hole tui khushi (please khushi hou)
Shokale uthia kintu
Bolbi mone mone
Dekha hole, kotha kobo
Hat dhore, dui jone
(obossho amake tor hat, emnitai dhore rakhte hobe, bolato jana, kokhon ghushi tushi mere boshish. Haye! Janina tor khoma pabo kina)
| This is a discussion on Severus + 28 lines within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; Paka dhane tor, porlore ki moi? Bara vate ki sai? Amonti issa, silona kokhono, Sunre boro (/soto) vai Ghat hoese, maf cheyesi, R korishna man Khot dilam, ai nakete amar, ... |
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| bah bah ... nice poem ... *clap* * clap* ........ amader Poke master koi gelo ? ... reply dekhte chai replyyyyyyyy ..... lol !!! | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Sundor sora, sorakar hishabe mam korte parte. Ta bhai ai severus maneta ki bujlam na. etaki karo nam? | |||||||||||||||||||
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Ehab, Bah! ami kokhono chora diye eto shundor kore khoma chaite dekhini...khubi shundor likhechis.....Asha kori amader Severus bhaiaaa obosshoi unar shundor chokku diye khomar dristite dhekben... তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে, আপন তালে, আপন সুরে... | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| nicee , but why u apologizing ? what did u do to severus? how childish ! Say: I seek refuge in the Lord of the Daybreak ~From the evil of that which He created; ~ From the evil of the darkness when it is intense; ~ from the evil of malignant witchcraft, ~And from the evil of the envier when he envies. Quran (Al-Falaq) | |||||||||||||||||||
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| U really leave In ur Own Dream World Adrehab. Dont U ? U thought that really Hurt Severus  Severus, Come here and break this Confusion. He thought u got Hurt. How u cud gave him this wrong Idea  ? I thought u r the one who hurt everyone so far  "The Best part of Having a Cancer is you can smoke as much as you want" - A Cancer Paitent | |||||||||||||||||||
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| hmm.apnar jotho gula chorai poresi,amar kache khubi valo legese. apni jai likhen,pran khule likhen,ei bepare ami nishchith.onek onek valo laglo. Severus bhai k bolsi,""bechara 1000 bar kan dorese,tar poro ki apnar mon golbena.achhca tik ache ami arekta nothun sastir bebosta korsi,"atlantik er tanda panite 25 bar chubani dewabo,ekta maiyare dewaiya".r noile ei forum er sobai mile apnare dulai dimu"mairer upore oshud nai""" abaro bolsi,amar khub val;o legese.  আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি । চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে, সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি । | |||||||||||||||||||||
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