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Smile Saying Goodbye, Posted January 3rd, 2007, 08:22 PM #1 (permalink) |
One day you will understand why i did this
you hurt me
i hurt you, we were never ment to be
when i returned that day
i came to find you love some1 new
u took her hands
u spent endless nights talking to her
while i was thinking of you
u got close u formed a realationship that is true
i made my sins you did 2
my only sin was to fall inlove with a man like you
i sed i'd forgive you but i couldn't
you broke me in two
i swore i get even and in this case i have
i did to you what you did to me
i want you to feel the pain i felt sinse the day
she told me you loved her
the pains still there
my hearts still broke
not a day goes by that u don't
roam my mind
in time u'll understand
why i did this and why i had to go
my love was pure
But to you i was just a joke,
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Default Posted January 3rd, 2007, 08:25 PM #2 (permalink) |
after many days again a nice poem , but touchy poem.thanks for this beautiful poem.
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Default Posted January 3rd, 2007, 08:25 PM #3 (permalink) |
SAD but nice poem Alice ........ tnkx for sharing
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