~ Proverbs Of Hell ~

NovemberRain · November 3rd, 2006, 08:48 AM

i was pretty high yet i couldn;t resist typeing this crap. i hope u guys will like it

She searched for the keener sound and strong emotion
While I touch the mist of an old devotion.
A breath upon her neck falls once again
As the descended time walked though the streets of main.

Here is the room at last refrain
As the sky turns in a garden full of rain.
The edge of Unseen Ocean
Intimidate with inevitable illusion
Sets the flowers free thought the window
Between the wet earth and solitary widow.

I call it my own yard
Like the yellow broken wings bird.
I feel I should touch those flowers
As she sleeps for several hours.

Now that the sun hides in the silky dew
I count the moments and they were few.
Still the shadow of profound change -
Upon the dark night and the feeling of strange.

**TiTaKoRoLLa** · November 3rd, 2006, 09:00 AM

first off welcome bak!
second: cooool finally another poem from you!
made me a lil sad but still luved it

**Rio** · November 3rd, 2006, 02:15 PM

welcome back NovemberRain bro with a nice poem again.ur a true poem writer so what can i say about ur poem they ar always as usal awesome.

NovemberRain · November 13th, 2006, 02:57 AM

TiTaKoRoLLa and Rio

thank you both for ur comments. means alot to me

**OvI** · November 16th, 2006, 01:54 AM

Nice one bruv D:

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