Protikkhay

**BoIRaGi** · 10:51 PM

“Protikkhay “

Du chokh mele takai

Oshim duure akasher pane

Ek tukro megher ashay

Hoyto ashbe sei khon

Furabe protikkhar pala

Milon hobe ek dol megh-duuter sathe

Charidike tibrO aloker chorachori

Sei sathe dekhi dhu dhu balu-chor

OnontO Oshim Onakankhito sottO

TibrO roder ushnO choa

Jaliye dey jenO

Soob pashobik anuvuti

OboshonnO hridoye boshe thaka

OprottashitO shotto niye

Kalponik vobisshoter prottashay

Kobe pabO sei megh-duut er dekha

Kobe dekhbO Boshonto dhu dhu baluchore

Kobe hobe ek poshla bristY … amar jibone

Boshe achi sei protikkhay ………..

BLooD · October 9th, 2007, 08:11 PM

A nice one mama ! Impressive !

feona · October 9th, 2007, 10:35 PM

how did you make up such a beautiful poem??
its really nice

**afsana911** · October 10th, 2007, 11:32 AM

niceeeee.... hothat kore eto sad kobita ken???

**BoIRaGi** · October 10th, 2007, 01:38 PM

tnkx a lott to all of u buddies .......

Afsana -->> Mood Kharap plus ektu sick .... sob milaye obostha 12 ta ... e jonnO SAD poem ... lol

**mina** · October 10th, 2007, 02:23 PM

bah!!! kichuta bujechi kichu na bujhe roilam, chonder jibone anondo khujar protikkhai ke ba na thake? tuio jokhon jiboner shundortomo muhurto khojar pala shuru korli tahole to bolte hoi je best of luck...

**BoIRaGi** · October 10th, 2007, 02:34 PM

Ashahoto manusher Nirashar majhe beche thakte gele to kichu ekta Obolombon chai ...... tai ektu Asha korchi arO kichu din kolponar rajjer rajputrO hoye beche thakte .... ta na hole OnakankhitO vobisshot e nijeke joriye rekhe ki luv bol ?

mdon · October 10th, 2007, 02:40 PM

Apnar majhe Protiva ase bhai

**mina** · October 10th, 2007, 02:40 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by BoIRaGi
	Ashahoto manusher Nirashar majhe beche thakte gele to kichu ekta Obolombon chai ...... tai ektu Asha korchi arO kichu din kolponar rajjer rajputrO hoye beche thakte .... ta na hole OnakankhitO vobisshot e nijeke joriye rekhe ki luv bol ?

Shopno, ei shopner khure ta dhore amra poth khujhe berai...ebon karo mile jai to karo milena...kintu shopno dhekte bhulina...Jibon...shudu eitukui bolbo, shopner shara jodi na pash, mon ke bedhe felish na, ba, shopno dheka bondho kore dish na...karo khoti to hobena shopno dhekle...jodi shei shopno ke rupantorito na dhekish chintar kichui nei, tor onek bondhu ache jader sathe tor shopno ke choriye dite parbi....again...obossoi dua kori tor shopno jeno rupontorito hoi shundor rup niye.

**BoIRaGi** · October 10th, 2007, 02:56 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by mina
	Shopno, ei shopner khure ta dhore amra poth khujhe berai...ebon karo mile jai to karo milena...kintu shopno dhekte bhulina...Jibon...shudu eitukui bolbo, shopner shara jodi na pash, mon ke bedhe felish na, ba, shopno dheka bondho kore dish na...karo khoti to hobena shopno dhekle...jodi shei shopno ke rupantorito na dhekish chintar kichui nei, tor onek bondhu ache jader sathe tor shopno ke choriye dite parbi....again...obossoi dua kori tor shopno jeno rupontorito hoi shundor rup niye.

mina --- Oneek dekechi ... oneek thekechi.... jothestO shikhechi .... to be honest .. ..... shopno dekhte ekhon voy hoy .... karon shopnO kacher tukrar moto .. .khub sohoje Y venge jay ....... asha korte chai na ...... karon ta nirashaY bodle jay ..... Shukher sondhan korte chai na ..... karon seta dukkhe rupantoritO hote somoy ney na ...... just realistic hote chai ... hote chai emotionless ... sokto pathorer moto .... vangbO tobu golbo na typ ..... r bondhu der kotha bolis ? bondhura ki sobshomoy nxt jon k bujhte cesta kore ? tar ki eta dekhte cesta kore kenO tar bondhu ashte ashte bodle jacche ? ..... emon jodi hoy ... tobe to seta arO koster ... karon tokhon Bondhu theke O manush beshi Nis-shongO hoye pore !!!

mdon -- tnkx brOO

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