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This is a discussion on *** prosner jobab *** within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; ***prosner jobab*** jani vabcho, kivabe katche amar dinguli aaj. amar vubone ki ager mothoi odhvuth shaj? ager motoi ki elomelo,oguchano? tumar nisshase meshano ache jani, shoto ovijog,shoto oviman. kolmilotar jol-a ...

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Lightbulb *** prosner jobab ***, Posted October 18th, 2007, 10:28 PM #1 (permalink) |
***prosner jobab***

jani vabcho,
kivabe katche amar dinguli aaj.
amar vubone ki ager mothoi odhvuth shaj?
ager motoi ki elomelo,oguchano?

tumar nisshase meshano ache jani,
shoto ovijog,shoto oviman.
kolmilotar jol-a rekhesile pran,
ami pathor shoman.

nijer kotai bolsi shuno,
ami ki bodhlate pari?
bolo kono groho jabeki kokkho chari?
ami j groher nnay,shomajer alo bihin.

mon-a ki pore ek rudhela dhupure,
tumar chobi aakte giye madobilota ekhesilam.
amitho tumate prio ful e dekhesilam.
ami onek ful ekesilam.

rong-tuli thee r mete utina,
shukiye geche hoytho amar jolrong.
ki vabsho,amar soilpik mon-a dorese jong?
na ,emonti hobena kokhono.

kak dakha vure
ber hoi tuntunider bashar khuje.
shunechi ora thake patar vaje.
ki bolcho,"ami bestho okaje!"

bochor ghure ashe falgun,
kukiler kuhu-kuhu gaan,tumul hoichoi.
ami e joyi hoi.
janotho ami harte janina.

srabon-a boroshon.
bristithe vije vije kadhi ichche motho,
bristir jol-a mishe amar kosto jotho
muche hridoy khotho.

aajo besto amar kolom.
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ami harai dhure,bohu dhure,
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hashitei peyesi oboshor.

r tumi....
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তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

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সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 19th, 2007, 07:27 AM #2 (permalink) |
sad poem but really touchy..
Learning To Breathe
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