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Post ~~ Pothik ~~, Posted October 20th, 2007, 02:28 AM #1 (permalink) |


Duure jolche timtime lamp post er alo

Ondhokarer buk chire

Bolche jenO dekhO amay

Ami je pother dishari




Charidike modhur nistobdhota

Shanto niribili thomthome

Prokitir majhe

Deke choleche ek jhak jhi jhi pokar dol




Ondhokarer oporuup sundorjo

Dheke diyeche jenO

Konokone thanda rater

Kuashar chador diye




Nam na jana fuler misty gondho

jenO surovito kore tuleche

Chari pasher OnabritO

Ononto mohonio sourov




Akasher taroka rashi

Miti miti hasite jenO

Vore felte chay

Nirjonotar EkatittO




Ondhokarer buuk chire

Digonto pane cholechi ami

Oklanto ek

DurontO Pothik !!


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ahh.. nice.. describes the night in a really nice way..
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Default Posted October 21st, 2007, 03:12 AM #3 (permalink) |
mamuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu fataieee fella to . really nice poem nice style . keep it up mamu.
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