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Default Poth chola, Posted February 13th, 2008, 11:07 AM #1 (permalink) |
cholte cholte hariyechi je amar poth kobe kokhon ke ba jane, sudhu jani cholechi ami eka poth dhore hazar o manusher e vire. chuye jai koto hashi koto gaan, otopor hariye jay jibon er majhe, chare na pichu sudhu dukkho gulo jeno ditio chaya hoye robe amai ghire..brishtir gaan shuni ami cholti pothe.. fish fish kore jeno bolche amai ore kothai tor ghor, keu nei ki re tor?
hashi ami sudhu apon mone, shey to bhenge geche shei kobe...hoye geche por.
rikto paye cholechi ontohin poth e.. hariye felechi jibon er taan, songi sudhu pakhider daak ar amar sushko golar gaan, trisnarto chokh khuje firey sudhu ki jeno oi dur nilimay, klanto hridoy bole uthe ar to pari na khoma kore dao amai. godhulir aloi boshe dekhi ami pakhi der jhak bedhe fire jawa, ki nidarun bestota manusher jor kodome bari chola, ratri name ei prithibir buke theme jai shob kolahol, tobu thame na to mor poth chola, tomader majhe eka ek ami....hete choli obirol.

Hm, mon bhalo nei, desh e jawar asha r shomvabona ta dhulisshat hoye gelo hotat kore ek poloke, tai jani na ki likhte giye ki likhe fellam. khomaprarthi jodi kauke biroto kore thaki.
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Default Posted February 14th, 2008, 06:44 PM #2 (permalink) |
Was it a Poem or Just intro..?
Just Curious.. What Was it bro?

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Default Posted February 14th, 2008, 11:43 PM #3 (permalink) |
Core er bacha tumi ki eita dekhoni ki likhche....

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Hm, mon bhalo nei, desh e jawar asha r shomvabona ta dhulisshat hoye gelo hotat kore ek poloke, tai jani na ki likhte giye ki likhe fellam. khomaprarthi jodi kauke biroto kore thaki.


ummm, Eije Eka manush,

apnar likhata jetai hok na keno...ekhane bohiprokash hoyeche apnar moner betha/kotha ja onek shomoi amra mukh diye bolte parina ta kolomer achor diye likhe jai....othoba modern juge typing kore jai...

bhalo legeche....

dhonnobad apnake,
amader sathe onoshobhag korar jonno ebon sujog deyar jonno porar apnar beakto kichu kotha/betha.

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Default Posted February 14th, 2008, 11:45 PM #4 (permalink) |
Poem core

anyway mon kharap korle tumi porajito hobe, be strong and do your duty.
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