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Default Posted August 17th, 2006, 09:38 AM #11 (permalink) |
Ovi dont death always breaths upon us.. you never know when it will betray ur breath..
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Default Posted August 17th, 2006, 12:47 PM #12 (permalink) |
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Default Posted December 26th, 2006, 11:06 AM #13 (permalink) |
it is very easy to get compliments here in Doshomik... that is very nice but not good!

Core good try and much better then anything i can write but doesn't make sence.
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Default Posted December 27th, 2006, 10:56 PM #14 (permalink) |
1st of all I greatly appriciate for being an exception.. But when you said You can write better without making any sense.. I wanna ask you 2 things.. which part of it didnt make any sense?.. and write one without making any sense =).. I will wait mr Bidrohee..
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Default Posted December 27th, 2006, 11:13 PM #15 (permalink) |
Hmm.. where have I read that before
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Default Posted January 5th, 2007, 11:44 AM #16 (permalink) |
Where Rex ?
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Default Posted January 5th, 2007, 04:38 PM #17 (permalink) |
/me gasp! CorE u plagiarized? i am very disappointed wid u..but still like the poem
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Default Posted January 6th, 2007, 02:32 AM #18 (permalink) |
wow ..... awesome poem CorE bro ....... specially -----



I get down on my knees…
looking at you…

ahh.. the portrait of life…
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Default Posted January 6th, 2007, 09:46 PM #19 (permalink) |
CorE bro give us some more poem why do u stop posting poem in here bro ?
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Default Posted January 13th, 2007, 12:02 PM #20 (permalink) |
Coreyyy u geh to write such poems like these. lolz...it was reallllllyyy nice. Keep it up. And I liked these 1st 4 lines of the poem...same as OvI. <3 La La La La...

When I am lost…
lost in my deep thoughts,

I feel the death…
upon my shoulder…breaths.
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