When I am lost…
lost in my deep thoughts,
I feel the death…
upon my shoulder…breaths.
I don’t blink…painting..
across my heart
‘Cause my eyes
they are still shut…
I get down on my knees…
looking at you…
ahh.. the portrait of life…
gloomy...blurry eye sight
all those views…
Then again the sky gets gloomy..
clouds are covering my thoughts..
Lightening in my memory
and a drop of rain on my eyes..
A deep breath.. ahh...
Life...those lips…
a simple smile on it..
is my greatest desire..
Every move...your breaths…
Touches me...sets me on fire…
Your eyes…Where I want to get lost…
and surf for eternity…
Your words…
Where I find…violins playing softly…
Then the lightening…and a scream…
The rain drop...falling...down to my chin..
"Coveted love has turned into agony today…
sight decors a portrait..
white corpse sheet…
Yet search I amidst old poetry…
that familiar lips of my love…
my sweet heart...imaginary .."
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| I don know why, amar chokhe pani chole ashche poem ta pore....Khub shundor...thanks for sharing..  Pяιη¢єѕѕ Pяσνα    | |||||||||||||||||
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| aleaf  ..dat was awesome ...er theke beshi ki bolbo jani na sudu feel korte partesi but cant give dem words ... §wëèt Îññô¢êñt Åñgêl  | |||||||||||||||||||
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| I get down on my knees… looking at you… ahh.. the portrait of life… gloomy...blurry eye sight all those views… those line really nice.hei CorE bro ur a good gamer i know but now i know ur also a poet.i really like ur poem.keep posting.  | |||||||||||||||||||
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| thanks everyone.. I try I am not that good at english.. my vocubulery <censored><censored><censored><censored>s.. sometimes i get lost and cant find the ord i am searching for.. anyways I will try.. I promise! | |||||||||||||||||||
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| I get down on my knees… looking at you… ahh.. the portrait of life… gloomy...blurry eye sight all those views… asolei osadharon .....  oNe pArT kId 10 pArTS hErO! | |||||||||||||||||
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 eita tor nijer lekha  bissash hoy na :/... Joss hoisey1 kothay  -=| Naam Harano Kono Pother Thikanaay |=- | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Lol razku.. tui janish.. ami nijei nijer shotta.. I dont copy others.. as i am straight forward.. I cant be copying someone else... so yeh its mine.. I am not so good at english.. so ei poemta banglai toiri kora erpor mone mone translate korechi.. kichu word odol bodol.. this is my 1st english poem.. was sort of scared.. anyways.. thanks asmani cindy propen all.. its my pleasure u guys liked it! | |||||||||||||||||||
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| When I am lost… lost in my deep thoughts, I feel the death… upon my shoulder…breaths These lines r just...Awesome.....! Simple The Best.....!..... Thats why i lob my irc nick... - OvI\LosT CorE bhaia jotillll jacchen....! | |||||||||||||||||||
