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Default Posted December 11th, 2006, 11:24 PM #11 (permalink) |
It was early in the morning and I woke up just like every other day
To fulfill my dreams, chase my ambitions
I walked out of the house smiling at my little angel
Bye papa she says covering her face

The day was beautiful so was the fragmented air as I passed by a garden
Just a thought back how beautiful was my wife looking
Never did she sound so sweet before when saying pardon
As I went to my office 79th floor I see Ali just entering with Peres and Jhon

Seeing all smiling I called and join the conversation
It was the everyday thing; girls, pubs and good looking admiration
It was a lovely day at work everyone was enjoying while I whisper my wife’s
Stylish pardon

Loud screaming I hear and everyone looked in great confusion
Plane hit the building was the cry we will not survive we all would die
Scared and helpless banging noise and flashes of my angel
I was only crying; I love you, I love you oh my little Angel

God seeing my tears and love arranged this meeting
So here am I in your dream with prayer love and greetings.

Never wrote a poem... Lolz
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Red face Save our youngsters, Posted December 13th, 2006, 11:11 PM #12 (permalink) |
little little blinking,twinkling-are those stars?
Oh!Padron me ,sir,they are human youngsters.
what are they doing with red,blue flashes!
Hope they are not getting into clashes.
They know not what pleasure
They need to bring to their surrounding-
An atmosphere they would create
So lovely,so embelishing.

They have been the rich treasure of our pure joy
But,stealthy crept near a black paw
To turn into a deadly toy.
Handed them with guns,and the destruction began.
Staming the delicate hands,blood ran.
Pungent smell from dirty books
Trying to replace the holy fragrance of library books.
Every brick felt the shudder-
Campus ground covered with gun powder.
Questioning the authority"an exhibition of shrugs
'cause the flowers have been ripped in the buds
Who are the devils that threw the pens
Of the youngsters and handed over arms?
Are those "viral germs"
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Default Posted December 19th, 2006, 09:28 PM #13 (permalink) |
Tomorrow is the final day for posting so I ask please post your poems by today

Severus, you are a member of the writers club now so please do post your poem


A request to everyone, please do return to vote

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Default Posted December 19th, 2006, 10:40 PM #14 (permalink) |
Take a good look at yourself and see how well you've grown,
your smile shines brighter than anything that can be shown.
Notice the talented actions of your daily works,
only from above this can be made of your creative perks.
Do you see what I see? You tell me it's not true,
but I'll make you realize that you're one of a kind.
The blue sky functions with your love in mind,
it would always be gray and easy to find.
You are the one who keeps me from dying,
the one who carries me on your wings and keeps me flying.
I wish you knew how intriguing you are to me,
because your heart is made from links of gold in the midst of lovely.
Something wakes me up when you're always near,
whenever you're around, I'll never have anything to fear.
Whisper softly in my ear, and tell me that you'll be with me forever,
that's what I want to hear.
You're very special, I want you to know,
You're very special to me, so realize that it'll continue to grow.
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Default Posted December 19th, 2006, 11:11 PM #15 (permalink) |
Moments in life
There are moments in life when you miss someone
so much that you just want to pick them from
your dreams and hug them for real!



When the door of happiness closes, another opens;
but often times we look so long at the
closed door that we don't see the one,
which has been opened for us.


Don't go for looks; they can deceive.
Don't go for wealth; even that fades away.
Go for someone who makes you smile,
because it takes only a smile to
make a dark day seem bright.
Find the one that makes your heart smile.


Dream what you want to dream;
go where you want to go;
be what you want to be,
because you have only one life
and one chance to do all the things
you want to do.


May you have enough happiness to make you sweet,
enough trials to make you strong,
enough sorrow to keep you human and
enough hope to make you happy.




The happiest of people don't necessarily
have the best of everything;
they just make the most of
everything that comes along their way.




The brightest future will always
be based on a forgotten past;
you can't go forward in life until
you let go of your past failures and heartaches.


When you were born, you were crying
and everyone around you was smiling.
Live your life so at the end,
you're the one who is smiling and everyone
around you is crying.


Please send this message to those people
who mean something to you (I JUST DID);

to those who have touched your life in one way or another;



to those who make you smile when you really need it;
to those who make you see the
brighter side of things when you are really down;
to those whose friendship you appreciate;
to those who are so meaningful in your life.
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Default Posted December 19th, 2006, 11:58 PM #16 (permalink) |
Choking on love
Love of hate
Hate of love
Unoccupied space
In her bed
Rusting in her head
Diminishing tears
Gasping breath
Disturbing death
In the air
Sadding happiness
Under the covers
Emanating lust
Softest touch
Hidden feelings
Too hard to feel
Confusion sports the game
It was never there
Just another love affair
Cholo Ekta Notun Pritibi Gori
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Default Posted December 20th, 2006, 06:38 PM #17 (permalink) |
Come on people why be shy just post your peom... It's the last day today!!!
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Default Posted December 21st, 2006, 12:44 AM #18 (permalink) |
i'll re-enter, mainly to keep Masoom's words , because he is working really hard to make this competition a success. so i'd be happy for his efforts if this contest rocks on ...


A cigarette break

I hate to stay inside when my tank is hot,
As it gets so smokey day for all the shot.
So I go out and lean against a wall still stiff,
And lit a cigar, which was my comrade's gift.
I pass the lazy time waiting, by staring at a guy,
Who is lying on the mud with separated thigh.
It struck me funny, that I can walk or blink or breathe air,
While the man, torn by my shell, can only stare .
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Default Posted December 21st, 2006, 02:00 AM #19 (permalink) |

we are passing
through the river of fire

where we cant express
all of our desires

where is our destiny
we don’t know

we can just request the wind
blow blow and blow

the day we are passing
is not shiny

the boat we have
is a very tiny

but all we have
just a little hope

that are bonded
with a thin rope

but we are
mooving forward

desires r flying
directly to upword


And We know what We‘ve
got to be Immortality

We ‘ll make the journey
through the eternity


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Default Posted December 21st, 2006, 02:48 AM #20 (permalink) |
Only few days back we met and at last I felt at peace
Few days back when you first smiled my heart felt so much ease,
Thrilled me! With tears my heart spoke and all other method of death it detest
In a hurry prayed this to be the minute and in your arms to go to rest.
No one ever smiled at me with so much love and care that my heart
No longer could bear and busted with tears that was hidden for years,
My conscious mind was continuously asking is this all true?
My subconscious mind kept waking and warning that again I’ll be blue.
Few days back my life was different but now its few days later, and
I look back before that few days and grieve I was so much better.
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