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Default Poem competition 2, Posted December 2nd, 2006, 12:56 PM #1 (permalink) |
Please vote

Please do not post anymore poems as the time has ended and poll started.

A request to everyone please vote for the person you think deserves to win, not because he/she is your friend

Poll closing 2nd of January 2007
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Default Posted December 2nd, 2006, 05:57 PM #2 (permalink) |
Very nice Thread Masoom Bro ... Guyz lemme say somethin more about it ...
Plz dont ostt any Off Topics ... Don have to post to say thanks ... If u lyk any one just Hit Thanks ...
If u don lyk any poem dont have to say about it ... Just don thank or don vote ...
U can only post if there is a big, great mistake on any poem, not lyk a simple spellin mistake ...

Now guyz start posting ur Poems ... Don feel shy ... And One more Request ... Plz Plz Plz vote who deserves ...

Nd Masoom Bro Clear Up one thing ... Can ppl Post their Old Poems ?!?! Or Dey have to write a New one to post here ?!?!
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Default Posted December 2nd, 2006, 07:01 PM #3 (permalink) |

Destiny II


I have been waiting thousand nights

to have the memories of tonight..

the grasses on top of my grave have

recently got the touch of the rain.

The tomb of mine has been cleaned and painted...

and with the ugliest heart,

i am waiting inside faking a big smile...


The tiny wind that blows inside this grave

whispring today with all its might..

can you hear that whisper?

Darling my invitation to you.

Tonight i want to look at your face

with the light of the sacred moon..

i want to touch your soul

with the help of the northern breeze..

i want to confess that this soul

has lost it's wings as you haven't

smiled after my sin...

Darling dont you know,

Neither my love nor my will

but your smile had let me live...


Tonight, infront of Thee

I want to ask you to forgive me

for all my sins and with a heavenly kiss

Shall we promise a new journey?

The journey that will be never ending.

The journey that will never look back...

the journey that will be a history..

Not for the whole fu/cking world!

but for you and me...



(old one...if we have to post new poems..than plz delete)
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Default Posted December 3rd, 2006, 01:44 AM #4 (permalink) |
Very Nice Thread.....

I wanna say something

I belive we r lagging behind in some sections....coz You knw "One cant do everything alone".... So we need more of our members idea or any kind of suggestions which will help us to go more forward D:....

So please dont feel shy {LOL}.. give us ideas or anykind of suggestions.....

Kothai ache na " Doshe Mile Kori Kaz - Hari Jete Nahi Laz "

Thanks D:..... Looking for fwd for it






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Default Posted December 3rd, 2006, 09:18 AM #5 (permalink) |
I look up from the eyes of a broken soul,
looking up into the eyes of my breaker.
Looking into those eyes, i see nothing...
Looking down into mine, she sees everything.

I feel the roughness beneath my knees,
Ive been there for so long, that i no longer know what its like to stand head held high,
with being without the eyes of life for so long.

I need so bad for this relief to sweep across my body,
so that my knees no longer bleed,
so that my eyes no longer cry tears of bitter resentment.

The pain is only bareable for now.
As long as i still have the eyes of my life locked into mine,
i will not cry bitter tears, and wipe away the constant bleeding.
I am okay for now.

I am okay, i am trapped under the selfish wing of the one that makes me fly.
I kept leaping the flying over and over again.
I was caught by those eyes of life.

I took each saved leap for granted,
then i took one more.
This time i wasnt caught, not saved my those eyes of life.
but dropped to my brittle knees,
where i have been ever since.

My tears have not died,
and my wounds have not healed,
As i stare into the eyes of my breaker and my life.
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Default Posted December 4th, 2006, 05:17 AM #7 (permalink) |
this was my 1st written eng poem.. never shared with anbody b4

Midnight blue

There I was asleep under the sovereign sky
and saw something dilusional for which one could die.

what is it ? my mind searched through
I can't believe I didn't have any clue
All I could visualize is the color midnight blue.

could I touch it ? feel it ? again I wondered
These are pebbles of dream something whispered.

They exist I was amazed to know
and reached out to pick bending low.

but alas! where have they gone
I regret I didn't hurry to take some.

In my dream I thought I was dreaming
finally woke up to find everything dissapointing.
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Default Posted December 4th, 2006, 06:17 PM #8 (permalink) |
according to the rules i cant enter the contest , so taking off my entry
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Default Posted December 5th, 2006, 07:46 PM #9 (permalink) |
Moved all the questions to Poem competition 2 - Questions

Please post all of your questions on that topic.






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Default Posted December 11th, 2006, 02:49 AM #10 (permalink) |
Please vote

A request to everyone please vote for the person you think deserves to win, not because he/she is your friend
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