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Lightbulb **** ovishare feona ****, Posted October 17th, 2007, 10:41 PM #1 (permalink) |
eid mane khushi
nirvejal nirmol hashi,
dhulo mekhe
horche luto-puti,
NIRVOYE chute chola
NILAKAS er ghuri
ei rokon ekta chuttho misti poem peye reply naa diye parlam naa.
khoma cheye nicchi ,karon kobitay feona k sob shomoy "tumi" kore somvudhon koresi.r kono lekhay jodhi osshoshti vudh koren,plz amake janaben.apnar ujjol vobisshoth er protthasay.............................nirvoye_nil akas

*** alor ovishare feona***

hasnahena ful-a tumar chaya khuje peyesi,
pori beshe eshechile ki tumi feona?
diner aloy fire esho bondhu,
raatri moni hoye shudhu adhare mishe jeona.

shunamukhi patar nnay tumi ek ruposhi,
kamini fuler rong-a ongkitho maya.
adhar kalo chule jokhon binuni badhoini,
uraw chul,trishnartho ei dhokhina hawa.

reshmi shari pore nishuthi raate,
kebol junakir songi hobe ki mayaboti?
ovimane ghumre more ovuj ful,
hazaro gulap,bokool,shiuli,juthy.

sath sagorer othoi jol dew khele,
khule vire,tumar chuwa pete barebare.
keya bon-a fuler renute bodhu sajbe balika,
Feona vule jeona jethe a ovishare.

tumi aalor deshe firee esho bondhu,
sthobdho,biran kore diona sajano vubon.
shishir aaj sobuj gashe bichano,
Feona tumar jonnoi gora aloke Razashon.
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bondhu abaro tumar jonno suvokamona,valo theko protidin.
আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 17th, 2007, 11:47 PM #2 (permalink) |
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat a pleasant surprise
sopneO vhabi nai ato shundor akta kobita
tao abar amar jonno


atO fuler sate korle amar tulona?

mele ni kichuE millo na....

ful na ami renu hobo

batashe nil akashe

Veshe jabo....


binuni badte ami jani na

ki kore shajay ful khopay?

tumi bondhu shakable ki

say sob amay?



ami pori?

ami rupushi?

ami mayaboti?

Mone Lage Dola

Lagbe na ar kichu bola!



nishuti rate jabo ovishare?

jani na kono poth

tumi bole daow sob

dhewer sate sate

veshe jabo obirol~
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Lightbulb Posted October 18th, 2007, 09:11 PM #3 (permalink) |
****suvo jonmodin feona****

feona tumar akash taray charay cheyese,
sourolook-a nei dur-groher chaya.
aaj buker pajor vore njio ekaki,
suvashi,shu-shitol domka hawa.

ghumontho shishur nnay obuj maya,
aaji ghur-paak khak tumake ghire.
aaj sukher bristi choke srabon anuk,
sukh,nodhi goruk tumar bukti chire.

aajker diner shurjo aro uzzol hoyese,
tumar hridoy jure takok uzzol provat.
aajker gulap aro roktim hobe jani,
aaj muche jak tumar jotho oboshadh.

ful-er deshe somraggi tumi bondhu,
jani ful diyei ghora tumar razashon.
fuler renu diye rani shejecho balika,
tai ful diyei debo tumay shomvashon.

vule jaw jotho bishader shur bondhu,
hashite mitiye daw adharer jotho rin.
sukher nupur rinijini bajuk ajibon,
""Feona,suvo hook tumar jonmodin""

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ami jantam naa,gotokal Feonar jonmodin silo,janle prothom kobita ta jonmodin niyei likhtam.
feona,apnar kobita tao shundor hoyese.aro likhben ei prottasay...........
আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 19th, 2007, 07:28 AM #4 (permalink) |
a poem for birthday present.. wow.. really nice.!! nice poem btw.
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Default Posted October 19th, 2007, 02:14 PM #5 (permalink) |
ami pulokito
ami apluto
anonde ovivhuto!!!
choker kone jhol-mol korche anondo-osru
khuje firi vhasha je likbo kichu
sundor sundor kobita
likhe jao "nilakash"
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