Opottyo(Chaturthak Kobita)

Opottyo(Chaturthak Kobita)
Tara agomon kore , ashtei thake , shikor beye beye
tara name , namtei thake , oshtadhorer nigurho uttyape
tara rekhe ashe porichoy , shudrirho asmaner shuuchyo boloye
tara porichoy nie ashe tomader madhyome , jodio tara tomader noy.

Agomoni dhoni shuni shorbo-shoktimaner shoktimoy nam shune
amra shunte pai , tader o amader ruh rakha chilo shu-uchyo makane
amrao chilam ekdin; otopor dhomonite adesh name
vromon koro! valo monde, tobe punnyo nie esho , shorbo-shoktimaner shomipe.

oshtho o odhorer nibir shommilon, uttyopto hoye ekshomoy bhishon abege sheetol hoy
ushno o sheetoler drirho bondhon; tader ruh ke dharon kore cheton kingba ochetone
tara dhara rokhya kore, gen o prokritir shammyabosthar jonnye bohoman shomoyer sathe
amader moto tarao ashe , nigurho valobasha nie deher protiti kon e kon e

protiti akash urdhakasherdike uchyota vinnyo nichuta khuje pay na,
tara addyishto hoye shudrirho asman dharon kore srishtir adite
tithite tithite shomore-shantite , shomosto boloyshomuher odhikortar shomipe
ruhgon shikar kore , tumi vinnyo odhikorta nai , adi kingba onte

purbobortigon , kingba tar o onek ager purboshurider dhomonite
porichito hoy makaner shob ruh , vromone-bisrame , khoniker khipto jajabor
shikare shikar kore fela jay, jabotiyo hingsha,krodh , prithibir doshguli
otopor ruh shomapto kore ,ei drishyoman dharapat , jomin-shomuher buke tokhon ek notun dhuli vora khuli.

*gen=genetics

Hello Sazzad, First of all welcome to doshomik...

Kobita ki apnar likha..?

Chaturthak Kobita mane ki ? ......... seta na jene kono comments kora ki thik hobe ?

Boiragi bro , prothomei reply er jonnye dhonnyobad

"Chaturthak Kobita " holo , "Bengali Shahittyer" ekta notun stylish format of poetry . this format has come from the four dimension of physics . the doirgho , prostho , uchyota ebong shomoy. apnara chaile ami amar gota boi ta e ekhane post korte pari. kintu dukhyer bishoy , ekhane kivabe boi post korte hoy , ami ta jani na. Boi er nam holo "Kapalic" By "Sazzad Hossain".

Apnara chaile ami amar writing's , boi d/l korbar jonnye link dite pari , jate apnara d/l dite paren , noyto , emon korei banglish bhabe likhte hobe. ami pdf format e dite cheyechilam , even ekta ekta kobita alada alada kore , kintu pdf gulor properties apnader limit cross kore fele , tai r dite na pere evabe e likhechi . apanar reply er opekhyay roilam.

Sazzad


Hello Mina! first of all , thanks for replying . Ji kobitati jini ekhane type korechen , ashole uni e likhechen.

(Kobita ta ekhane ami e type korechi)


Kidding just

thankz again for replying

sazzad

Hmmm ...... notun dharar kobita pore anondO pabO asha kori ........ ekhon tomar kache amar 2 ta request Bro ........


1. tumi ekhono tomar introduction daOni amader kache .. so .... intrduce yourself section e ekti thread khule nijer porichoY daO


2. tomar boi er DL link ta PM kore daO amake ..... ami khub Y interested e dhoroner notun kobita porar r eta somporke porishkar dharona newar ..........


waiting ............

Thankz bro for replying . The d/l link of ma writing's is as ( sorry bro , onek onek chestha koreo , shorashori link ta dite parini , apni esnips.com e gie "chaturthak" likhe search dilei amar writings gulo paben , even "kapalic" likhe search dileo paben , the "sazzad hossain's writings folder e gie baki lekha gulo o paben )
the rules of "chaturthak kobita" has explained briefly in the book named "kapalic" . i think u will think about this new format of poetry . conciously, i have made a pole between science and poetry ; phylosophical thinking as well , mathmatically.

waiting for ur reply

"sazzad"

jani brO .. .sorasori link dite parbe na ...coz tomar posty ekhonO oneek kom .... r kichu post korle seta dite parte ... e jonnoY ami link ta PM kore dite bolecilam .......


Tomar choturthak kobitar bistaritO janar jonno notun ekta thread dilam sekhane giye bistaritO bolo >>>> (thread link)>>> http://www.doshomik.net/showthread.p...8704#post98704

Reply deyar jonno dhonnobad! oti shigri apnar likhare onubadh porar jonno ami boiragir deya thread-e jachi. Apnar Kaplic boita porar iche roilo.