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Default oporinoto ochena sriti, Posted September 13th, 2006, 09:18 PM #1 (permalink) |
onek din por kichu ekta likhlam.. jar jonno lekha.. se porle bujhbe.. but eta kobita kina jani na.. just moner kichu kotha likhlam


oporinoto ochena sriti
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tomake chena hoyni
valobasa esechilo
nimontron korechilo kache
jete didha hoyni

chhuye dekha hoyni
shihoron jegechilo
ridoy jure kapuni dhorechilo
nijke harate deri hoyni

tomay dekha hoyni
shopno dekhechilo
shopno gorechilo shopno
venge jete deri hoyni

tomay haste, kadte
ba kosto pete dekhini
tubo jeno chilem eki shotta
onuvob korte shomossa hoyni

valobasa chilo, shopner jogot chilo
bastobota paayni

vebechilam shomoy amader
protarona koerche
dure shoriye niyeche valobasa
kobita likhechilam jano?
ridoy ningrano kosto diye
lekha sei chhondo

kintu jokhon bujhechi shob e chilo
miththe ar chholona
jokhon jenechi shob e chilo ek khela
tumite ami chilam ek obohela
venge porini
ridoy churno hoyeche
chire felechi kobitar pata

tobu ghrina korte parini
ahoto onuvuti gulon kedeche
r ekbar samne darate cheyechi
oi chokhe chokh rekhe jante
badha hoye dariye ache mithhe hoye jauwa sei valobasa
ar tumi jeno hoye gecho
amar oporinoto ek ochena sriti
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Default Posted September 13th, 2006, 10:16 PM #2 (permalink) |
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Nice Jubi bro ;D !

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Default Posted September 14th, 2006, 02:10 AM #4 (permalink) |
JUBAiR bro apni o je poem lekhen ta to jantam na.pore khubi valo laglo bro.sundor poem.aro thakle post koren .deepaboli haha.
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Default Posted September 14th, 2006, 04:25 AM #5 (permalink) |
Khubbi Shundor Hoise... Thanks for sharing..!
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Default Posted October 9th, 2006, 07:47 AM #6 (permalink) |
Jubair, its nice if thers any more plz share with us....



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Default Posted October 9th, 2006, 01:06 PM #7 (permalink) |
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