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***diner sheshe***





bela sheshe dhinomoni,
lal tip hoye roy ghodhulir akashe.
roktojobar nnay alokitho kore sobujke.
shes barer motho alor alingon batashe.

vromorer gunjorone mukhoritho silo aajker dhupur,
totapi kichu ful kumari roye gelo.
lumosh beraler upodrob kromosh barshe,
debdharur chayay roof maya hoye elo.

prokritir nognota dakhte adhar besto,
alobihin a vubon jeno ek lozzaboti nari.
nak-kata danober golpo shuna ek shishur,
voy dhire giyese mohakash chari.

aajoki kadhbe obuj briddha prodip nibiye?
gupon betay ghumre morbe ki kono balka?
jolbeki shei bathi-ghore prodip ekaki,
alokitho hobeki chena nodhir obobahika?

kolongko niye utbe chadh niler buke,
mayamoy hobe ei purnima titir raat.
bash bagane bajbe haway bashi,
shundor rojoni jani oi shurjer e proshadh.

diner sheshe,jokhon junakir hat boshe,
jokhon hasnahena batashe aator chitay.
ek nodi sukh,hoythoba ek nodi dukh chupichupi
ghumer deshe nivrite ronger hool futay.




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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 22nd, 2007, 10:17 PM #2 (permalink) |
hey NIL onek sundor
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***daktar***

tumi dakatar,
tumi manober shebay niojitho ek pran.
alor path dhore hata mohapurush tumi hoyt0,
tumi pranir bethar kotho oboshan.

keno bodhle jaw kisher neshay?
keno ora koshai bolbe tumakei.
tumar areknam dekhesi praner shebok.
daktar mane koshai,ovidhane nei.

jotho beshi oshudh likhe daw toto beshi lav,
jenechi clinic a tumar commission ache.
oshohay keo tumi jobai koro,
luve bibekta tumar more geche.

clinic r chamber-a jobai koro,
manobota rekheso keboli boiyer patay.
jotho proyujon tar di-ghun owsodh daw,
goriber rokto chushe naw tumar kolomer guthay.

manusher hridoye mondhir ghore,
keno she mondhir abar nijei venge debe?
ful hoye naiba ele gacher dale,
keno kata hoye fuler gaye robe?

sukher neshay bodhle gecho tai,
tumar chaya bodhle giyeo bodhle jay.
pran pakhi tumar alo dekhe,
obosheshe adharei haray.

nijer poshutake jobai koro aji,
tumi bondhu abar shebok hoye beche takbe.
sukh tumitho tokhoni khuje pabe,
jokhon sobar hridoye naamti likhe rakhbe.




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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 25th, 2007, 08:24 AM #4 (permalink) |
nice poems!
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2 to poem Y shundor hoyeche NIlakash brO ...... but prothom ta beshi shokto bangla use korechO dekhe porar somoy mone hossilo er jodi bangla typ kore dite to mone hoy beshi valo hoto ........ parbe ki pore bangla type kore post korte ?
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***agune hath rakho***
(nothun murokhe ami:03)



avege hridoye jolse agun,momotay,
sokhi ei agune hath rakho.
nijeke bishuddho kore naw,
ei raate,ei juchonay.

druvo tarar kane kane,
shune naw amar choker vasha jotho,
kichu chena shur,kichu chena gaan.
balika nacho gaan-a,gaan-a.

koto nodhi prem shishir konikay!
kotho shuvash niyese kere,
kichu chuto ful,hashnahena,beli,
kichu hiree kona,mayar monikay.

nirob keno pruzzal chad aaji haay,
aaj j shuklopokkher ponchadosh thithi.
aarbi ghuray chorese onamika.
aaj hridoye k jeno madhol bajay.

sokhi ei agune haath rakho,
mege jabe dekhe kolonko vora chad,
hariye jabe jotho junaki,tara.
balikha ei agun hridoye makho.




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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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-----------------------------------
(nothun murokhe ami no:04)
***khulre dhuwar***


shunre obuj meye ,
ekhoni khulre duar.
moner kotha diye likhesi chiti,
dokhina hawa chitir showar.

beni badhishne oi kalo chule,
kajol jeno naa chuy oi chok.
aalta diye shajbi keno!
aaj hashithe nahoy ranga mukh.

aaj valobasha dilamchitir patay,
gulap-papri dilam khame vore.
khulre duar obuj meye,
dokhina hawa ashuk tori ghore.

ei fagune ami bonobashe,
tobuo toke niye j sob asha.
amar akashe tui chondro shurjo,
aaj tokei dilam valobasha.

toke niye shopno dekhi,
toor akashe urai ghuri.
bristi hoye aay matir buke,
aaji sojib hoye mori.

tui amar nil-juchona,
tui j amar akash.
amar mon-a tui dhoop chorali,
a mon-a tui chondhon shuvash.

khulre duar obuj meye,
elo buji dokhina hawa.
ekaki chitita jothone porish,
mitiye dish amar jotho chawa.


nirvoye_nilakas
12:33am
23:10:07 eng





-------------------------------
***vobo-shagor
(nothun murokhe ami no:05)


amar mon shotho jonom dhore,
ei shoikothe royese pore.
ami ek khondho pathor shoman,
amar dew guna diner holona oboshan.

dekhesi rongin paaler thori,
khonikei giyese desh chari.
tori amar vanga j bhai,
koon ashay she thori jol-a vashai?

nissho hoye eshechilen dhorar buke,
shudhu othoi jol aajo dhu-choke.
a mon ghumre more shukher neshay,
ami royesi beche aajo ashay ashay.

ethota bochor dhore aadhare royesi,
aadhare shudhu osru peyesi.
ami j aalor vubone nijeke rakhte chai,
ami j shur diye shopno ghorte chai.

kuler khuje shotho jonom dhore,
vanga thori amar vashche vobo-shagore.
sukher aashay obuj mon loiya,
kadhi dew er paane chaiya.



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keno jeno nijeke bar bar ei rokom kobitay fire pai,ami aajo khuje paini er karon ki.............tobe ki ami koste achi??? hoytho !!!
আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Beshi asha balo na,
jibonta tou ar karona,
eka eshe cho ekai jabe
shonge tou ar keho jabena?

tayle keno eto koshto,
onner jonno jibon noshto,
shagore ki shudu ekta mas
ja choile gele ar pabena!
ful fute jorile ki ar ful kono din futena?
.................kano tare bula jabena?
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*** cholar pothe esho ***
((nothun muroke ami 06))



shovvotar kranti-logno tekei hatsi ami,
tobu aajo roye gelam nihshongotar berajale..
kuashacchonno a provate amar,
surjo lukay dhushor megher arale.

bondhu cholar pothe esho,
dhu-choke akash-nil vore.
projapothi rong gaye mekhe niye,
esho duronto vromorer motho haway ure.

bondhu cholar pothe esho,
rongin kothar juri niye.
a adhare ek-muto juthsna,
kichu junaki,r kichu shopno niye.

bondhu cholar pothe esho,
dekhi kotho dur harano jay.
shishir veja gash mariye,
khuje firi kotho path dakha kuwashay.


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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখে