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nirvoye_nilakas · 08:22 AM

****HARANO PRIYA***

amar priya bodhle geche,
chupse gese taza ful.
amar priyar keno emon holo,
suvash haralo keno bokul.

kokhono hashe,kokhono kadhe,
kokhono nijeke lukiye rakhe.
vangchure methe ute hotath kore,
moron hathchani dey jibontake.

biggan bole manosik rogi,
tumra jake pagol bolo.
ami keno thar songi holamna?
she ekai keno bodhle gelo?

ami thari hoye silam ethokal,
ekhono achi,r thakhbo.
nistor pritibi tare dhure tele dileo,
ami priyake a buke pushe rakhbo.

srostar kache prartona kori,
"provu amar priyake tumi firiye daw,
por jonome amader milon hobe,
binimoye amake tumi moroni daw"

nirvoye_nilakas
1:15pm
24:02:07eng

***AMAR HOYE TEKO****

mon diyesi,besh koresi,
valobeshechi tumakei.
r kew e poreni amar chayay,
tumio pashe rekho amakei.

saaj-sokhale j bokul kuriyesi,
nij hathe gethesi j mala.
kebol tumakei porabo bondhu.
sara bela khelbo tumar satei khela

j alor jilik akasher buke,
j ashar prodip jelechi a choke,
j juchona mon khere ney,
sob peyesi tumay dekhe.

j hasi tumi khusite diyeso,
she hasi jeno thake chirokal.
bijoyer shur bajuk hridoye,
snigdo hook tumar protita sokal.

ei moner sathi tumi,
amar ei prem vule jeona.
j valobasa tumi amake diyeso,
moroneo tha firiye niona.

nirvoye_nilakas
4:12pm
13:02:07eng

Asmani · March 11th, 2007, 09:43 AM

mon diyesi,besh koresi,

besh korechen

**mina** · March 11th, 2007, 02:36 PM

abaro..ki boli tomar bondhu...asholei khubi bhalo laglo...keep writing!

**Rio** · March 11th, 2007, 03:56 PM

truely awesome and nice rhythmic poem bro. keep posting like that

**Rayan** · March 11th, 2007, 05:55 PM

Are nice one nirvoy

eita khubi bhalo hoise liked it

LuiTsean · 07:30 PM

nirvoye nilakashe likecho tumi kobita
moner joto kotha tomar chonde chonde bolbe ta
kobita tomar khub shundor ami kintu bolbona
amar kothay bujhe nio, kobitata mondo na......

**BoIRaGi** · March 13th, 2007, 06:05 PM

Again u com up wiv another best stroke ............. and it goes out of boundary ............ wot it ll be -->> 4 or 6 ? .................. lolzzz ........... Nice poem bro ........... keep posting

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