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Default Normality, Posted February 23rd, 2007, 06:06 AM #1 (permalink) |
While I've been loving you,
So much is new,
To me,
The things I see,
And do,
The things that are real,
In here,
My heart,
Are far apart,
From my old normality.
Normality.
There's a word,
I've never before used to relate
To myself,
Maybe that's one of the ways you've helped me to change.
Normal is a goal,
Strange oddities the 'norm',
Normal?
I only wish I knew,
As these feelings new,
Confuse me deeply,
As I lose myself in loving you.

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Default Posted February 23rd, 2007, 06:19 AM #2 (permalink) |
wonder ful poem aLice .............. tnkx for sharing



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Default Posted February 23rd, 2007, 09:53 AM #3 (permalink) |
Cooool poem

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Default Posted February 23rd, 2007, 12:57 PM #4 (permalink) |
ur such a good writer so keep going.cool poem.
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Default Posted February 23rd, 2007, 01:51 PM #5 (permalink) |
nice poem

like some of ur other work better but this good too

keep it up
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