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Default Mera khamoshi, Posted October 2nd, 2007, 02:45 PM #1 (permalink) |
Gulabo ne kiu chuwa tujhe,
may nehi sayh saka,
dur se sirf dikhta hu tujhe,
kuch nehi kayh saka.

Hawayone chuwa hay kiu,
haseen julfe tera,
sayh nehi saka,
kayh nehi saka,
khamosh bate mera.

Ye rat hay suhani bari,
sirf chand hay sath mera,
tu roti rahi,kho ti rahi,
sitaro me mujhe dhundti rahi,
sayh nehi saka,tujhe chu nehi saka,
ye murda ashik tera.




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U even stared to wryte poetry in Hindi after fallin in Love wit that Other Hindi Gurl : ?!
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Default Posted October 5th, 2007, 04:48 PM #3 (permalink) |
Tomar Likha Poem ?
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U even stared to wryte poetry in Hindi after fallin in Love wit that Other Hindi Gurl : ?!
Which girl?! urdu te try korsilam not hindi!
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Tomar Likha Poem ?
Cute hoyeche Onek.
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The Gurl at Ur Class My Boy. Don b afraid of eXpressing it.
Well, My bad, I don really can differ Urdu and Hindi. Both looks pretty much same to me.
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Default 1 t Shaer, Posted October 7th, 2007, 07:56 PM #6 (permalink) |
May shaer to nehiiiiiiiiii, magar ai kobiiii
Jobse pora mayne terko khamosi, shaeree agaee

sun tahole shaer:

Tarif apko keya korunga, Propen Bahba
Apko tarif keya korunga, Propen Bahba, bahba
Are tarif to korunga, O Larkiko, jo apko khamosh banaia Subhan Allah keya bat Subhan Allah
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May shaer to nehiiiiiiiiii, magar ai kobiiii
Jobse pora mayne terko khamosi, shaeree agaee

sun tahole shaer:

Tarif apko keya korunga, Propen Bahba
Apko tarif keya korunga, Propen Bahba, bahba
Are tarif to korunga, O Larkiko, jo apko khamosh banaia Subhan Allah keya bat Subhan Allah

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Gulabo ne kiu chuwa tujhe,
may nehi sayh saka,
dur se sirf dikhta hu tujhe,
kuch nehi kayh saka.

Hawayone chuwa hay kiu,
haseen julfe tera,
sayh nehi saka,
kayh nehi saka,
khamosh bate mera.

Ye rat hay suhani bari,
sirf chand hay sath mera,
tu roti rahi,kho ti rahi,
sitaro me mujhe dhundti rahi,
sayh nehi saka,tujhe chu nehi saka,
ye murda ashik tera.






wah wah wah!

meri rabba...

keya kamal ki baat hey!!

yeh to shaeri nehi teri...

har ashiq o ki dil ka baat hey!!



tujhsi great ho ji!!
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wah wah wah!

meri rabba...

keya kamal ki baat hey!!

yeh to shaeri nehi teri...