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Default To lost in you, Posted May 6th, 2007, 12:20 AM #1 (permalink) |
The truth is...
I miss you, cant let you go
Memories of you make me cry
Forever never seems to really last
It's just another day
Lies can be packed into
All those love letters
The truth is....
I'm lost in jealousy, envy and love
Lost about the boy with brown eyes
You don't even care
Why are you tearing my soul?
And taking it with you
I'm left with nothing
All of these pieces
On the ground and no one
To pick them up
The truth is...
I'm lost, never to be found again
For if you have no soul
How can you truly be found
Go ahead take the rest of me
Rip my lost soul out
The truth is...
I could never love another
As much as I loved you
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very powerful...
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Default Posted May 6th, 2007, 01:06 AM #3 (permalink) |
Always Liked your poems..nice one too
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wowww!!! onek shundor kore kotha gulo bolso. niceee!!
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Default Posted May 6th, 2007, 02:35 PM #5 (permalink) |
another nice gift to us...it'a pleasure to read ur poem...
Some friends forget, Some move away
Some keep silent, Some just change
But I’m not 1 of them, I’m here just 4 two moments
now & 4ever...
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Default Posted May 6th, 2007, 03:07 PM #6 (permalink) |
Heya Katie ........ nice poem once again ........ ty for sharing dear. keep posting new poemz

i wanna quote ur ending ... coz its a very powerful ending which z obviously rare one.


The truth is...
I could never love another
As much as I loved you

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