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Default Just another face, Posted February 12th, 2007, 05:03 AM #1 (permalink) |
Now when he sees my face,
i'll be a stranger to him, with just another face
I'm dead to him
dead to myself. the flowers wither and ice melts away.
Life is only a flash brought before ones eye. I'm just another face
just another sin. Another person waiting to die, left on the ground to rot. I'm just another loser,
put down by all my Sins I fight yet i fail,
i fly yet, i fall. I'm worthless, I'm no one. I cry but no one sees, I scream but no one hears.
I want to get out of this place! I am tired of all this pain.
If i could only go back to elementary youth. I miss my innocences and numbness to the world all around.
Now i live in an ocean filled with all my own tears.
now when he sees my face,
i'll be a stranger to Him, with just another face
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 05:15 AM #2 (permalink) |
R u serious aLice ? ........ My GoD ......... wat a realistic poem ............ is it ur imagination or
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 10:57 AM #3 (permalink) |
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Very good job Alice
thanx for sharing
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Default Posted February 12th, 2007, 12:07 PM #4 (permalink) |
i feel very sad, its really a sad poem dosto.but nice one thanks.
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