Joyitar Joyjatra

**BoIRaGi** · January 8th, 2007, 03:05 AM

heya frendz ....... ajke 2 din dhore besh Jor amar ....... kichuY valo lagchilo na ....... tai ki korbo ki korbo vabte vabte mathay kichu elomelo vabna basha bedhecilo ........... amar elomelo vabna guloke just typ kore tomader sathe share korte issca holo ........ janina eke kobita bola jay naki pagoler prolap ...... tar poreO ....... tomader sathe share korci amar ele-bele Vabna gulo ke -----

Amar ekta sopno chai
Hote chai ami sopner prithibir Pantho

Du chokh mele dekhte chai
Khola akasher Niil ronger khela

Khelte khelta hariye jete chai
Rongin pakhar projapotir sathe

Pukurer panite aguun dhorate chai
Mach der sathe satar kete

Kolpo loker shopno purite
Biliin hoye mishe jete chai

amar shopner naam diychi JOYITA
take niyei bachte chai sara jiboon

se hobe amar ondhokar jiboner
Ekmatro ashar timtime mombati

Rimijhim bristi veja dupurer
Mishty modhur roder khela

Kon kone Shiter rate
KOmboler ushno choa

Ononter pothe veshe chola
Nabik bihin pal tola dingi

Se jeno sagoere buker
Uttal torongoer achre pora dhew

Omito somvabonar duar khule ekdin se
Ashbe amar duare

Bolbe , ami eshechi
Dhore rakho du haat diye

Jete diO na konodin
Harate diOna tomar chokher pata theke

Sedin theke shuru hobe
Amar sopner prokrito sarthokota

R sedin theke shuru hobe
Amar JOYITAR JOY JATRA

eta pore kew abar osushtho manushe prolap bolo na kintu ......... coz ami nije jani Ke ei forum er Residential Mental ...... lolzzzz

**Prova** · January 8th, 2007, 03:11 AM

Wow...eto taratari Likhe fella?...Sick hoyeo? U r a Genious...I liked it...kichu kichu jaygay bujhi nai...but still..i liked it...THanks for sharing...

**BoIRaGi** · January 8th, 2007, 03:19 AM

tnkx MishTy ....... atleast boloni je Joere moddhe pagoler moto elebele kotha likhechi .......

Rahul · January 8th, 2007, 03:40 AM

AWESOME!!!

Amar ekta sopno chai
Hote chai ami sopner prithibir Pantho
Tobe ai jor kore dilo more klanto!!

**BoIRaGi** · January 8th, 2007, 03:49 AM

Are bro ..... shuye shuye bore hoccilam tai to Pantho (Pothik) hoye Mone mone ektu hatte chaicilam ....... to hata shurur ageY dekhi tumi amake klanto banaye dila ........... lolzzz

Asmani · January 8th, 2007, 12:00 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by BoIRaGi
	tnkx MishTy ....... atleast boloni je Joere moddhe pagoler moto elebele kotha likhechi .......

elebele kothai sobar pochondo ..nice prolap Boiragi. ..nice start & ending . it's descriptive.
aro beshi beshi pagol hoye jao then kobita aro valo hobe. Joyitar joyjatra aro suvo hobe

**TiTaKoRoLLa** · January 8th, 2007, 01:43 PM

i like the imagery..esp in the beginning..got lost later on though

Severus · January 8th, 2007, 03:55 PM

Jessore er Joyita Choudhury ke apnar posondo hoise ?

**Rio** · January 8th, 2007, 05:31 PM

Boiragi mama cool poem mamu, hehe nice name u use mama. Tumi to mone hoi mama bd er new add ta dekhonai Severus bro tai bolche .

**BoIRaGi** · January 8th, 2007, 06:41 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by TiTaKoRoLLa
	i like the imagery..esp in the beginning..got lost later on though

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