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#1
Megh dekhe hoy irsha,
ami kodom fota valobasar bristi hoye nambo,
ghorer tiner chal beye,
tomar alto kore barano hate tup kore ese thambo.
#2
chad dekhe khub irsha hoy,
ami ekla rate udash hobar jochna hobo tokhon,
tomar nirghum cokh govir rate,
chad dekhe ar rat dekhe,
vison mugdho hobe jokhon....
| This is a discussion on !irsha! within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; #1 Megh dekhe hoy irsha, ami kodom fota valobasar bristi hoye nambo, ghorer tiner chal beye, tomar alto kore barano hate tup kore ese thambo. #2 chad dekhe khub irsha ... |
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| tomar alto kore barano hate tup kore ese thambo. << beshi materials ... chad dekhe ar rat dekhe, vison mugdho hobe jokhon.... << these two lines look weak. good attempt  | |||||||||||||||||||
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| megh dekhe amar irsha hoy na a to borosharE alapon.... shudhu irsha hoy tokhoni jhokon dekhi kalboshaki rupe hoy karo agomon...   | |||||||||||||||||||
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| propen bro...good one..  Are you still selling those butterflies? | |||||||||||||||||
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| I like it...something that touched...usually doesn't.... I guess prokritir chuwa ache bole.তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে, আপন তালে, আপন সুরে... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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| e jeno amar moner khatar supto kono kolpona eke diye gele kobita diye sat ronga ek Alpona shundor ekta kobita upohar dewar jonnO tomake oneeeeeeek dhonnobad propen !! | |||||||||||||||||||
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feona (December 5th, 2007) | ||
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| a jeno amar nirob ovibekti oboruddho kono artonad khola chule hawai ure gelo urboroshi kono kolpona..... | |||||||||||||||||||
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| i realized that i get neither head nor toe of feona's post. | |||||||||||||||||||
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m not gud at poetry  go n say hi 2 me!!! | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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