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Unhappy I won't forget..., Posted February 22nd, 2008, 08:09 AM #1 (permalink) |
I won't forget...



I won’t forget that fateful summer

And I won’t forget the beautiful day

I won’t forget the precious moment

When you finally looked my way.


I was shocked, a little surprised

In plain words, I was hypnotized

Love, I thought I surely knew

And then I lost my heart to you.


My seconds turned to hours

I lost complete sense and my mind

I foolishly confessed my undying love

And yet to reality, I was so blind.


You played with all my devotions

Took over my heart, my emotions

You lied to me a thousand time

So many, I lost count of the crime.


I loved to hear your voice, your laugh

I confess this from deep down my heart

It hurts to know you lied with such craft

When all I did was believe you from the start


Don’t know why I was so surprised

To hear of the plan you long ago devised

I should have known better than to trust

Falling so hard, so fast wasn’t just.


You left me so broken and in tears

You left me all alone with my fears

I lost myself, my dreams, & hope in love

So I let the tears fall as I gazed up above...
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Default Posted February 22nd, 2008, 12:25 PM #2 (permalink) |
Did u write this?...very Touchy....thanks for sharing!
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Default Posted February 23rd, 2008, 01:23 AM #3 (permalink) |
You left me so broken and in tears

You left me all alone with my fears

I lost myself, my dreams, & hope in love

So I let the tears fall as I gazed up above...

Wow!!! just too great! thanks!!
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Default Posted February 23rd, 2008, 01:37 AM #4 (permalink) |
awww... dis is so sweeet...very very touchy....i guess i wont 4get this poem...
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Default Posted February 23rd, 2008, 07:43 AM #5 (permalink) |
I was shocked, a little surprised
In plain words, I was hypnotized

Is this supposed to be positive…?
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Default Posted February 24th, 2008, 01:59 AM #6 (permalink) |
good attempt.
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Default Posted February 26th, 2008, 09:16 PM #7 (permalink) |
wow loved it

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...


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