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Default Posted March 26th, 2008, 01:16 PM #21 (permalink) |
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As your being innocent I feel like being innocent and just posting from the dictionary…!
  • piece written in verse: a complete and self-contained piece of writing in verse that is set out in lines of a set length and uses rhythm, imagery, and often rhyme to achieve its effect

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No offence and you would have many people saying nice things... so I choose not to be that nice person and speak the truth…! No one can and should express on behalf because he/she can’t feel what you can. Your poem has no rhythm... imagination is just like British weather and image… (You decide)!
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Thumbs up Posted March 26th, 2008, 04:23 PM #22 (permalink) |
That was a nice poem of course.

But I was not that writer ‘afsos’ (আফসোস)
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Default Posted March 26th, 2008, 08:54 PM #23 (permalink) |
Mad Man, why your making this big deal? don't understand.

and by the way not all poem has to have rhythm...

Husnara Api....sorry api, shobar je bhalo lagbe emon to kono kotha nei. shei jonno to amra amader point of view share korchi forum-e tai na. tomar bolte iche na korle boliona ke likhche. it's ok.

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Mad Man, why your making this big deal? don't understand.

and by the way not all poem has to have rhythm...

Husnara Api....sorry api, shobar je bhalo lagbe emon to kono kotha nei. shei jonno to amra amader point of view share korchi forum-e tai na. tomar bolte iche na korle boliona ke likhche. it's ok.
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Rhymes নিয়ে বাড়াবাড়ি।

That was a nice poem

I certified তাড়াতাড়ি।

Those who have objection

Leave this section

Without any মারামারি।
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Default Posted March 26th, 2008, 11:23 PM #25 (permalink) |
hhhmmmm
wat can i say....hhhmmm
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Default Posted March 29th, 2008, 03:08 AM #26 (permalink) |
hus janeman... dnt worry.. thanks for sharin... i liked it n alot of it liked it too.. but every1 is enititled to their opinions i guess... but dnt stop sharing.. we r living not to plz da whole worlds.. but only ourself...
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EvEr SiNcE yOu WaLkEd In2 mY lIfE, dReAmS eNvY mY rEaLTy..
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Default Posted March 29th, 2008, 05:46 AM #27 (permalink) |
i`m not angry or upset...it just i was abit enoyed that evry1 made a big deal out of it thats all...but i guess thats wat happens in forums...everybody has the right to share their thoughts and feelings...
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