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***hridoye shodesh***



ei falgun a oguchore,
ami firee jabo dhanshirir tire,
fire jabo sobuj chayay,
mon jekhane royese badha,amar banglay.

onek asha hridoye amar.
jeno sotho joog pore a ovishar.
dekhbo pahar,sobuj,akash-nil
heribo sapla futa zil.

momo prem bilabo kishuri nari pane,
batashe mishabo shur,nachbo gaane gaane.
sojibotha lute nebo dhokhina haway,
rudhela dhupure probin oshoter chayay.

ami bichiye debo mon bistirno shorishar khete,
urvo junaki hoye juchona raate.
ami fire jabo shithol patir saje,
nijeke mishiye nebo nokshi katar suthar vaje.

kolmilotha jol-a vasha pankouri,
she ruf rekhesi hridoye vori.
nil er buke muktho pakhir dana dekhe,
ami diyesi pakhi k hridoye rekhe.

ami jabo amar shunar banglay,
jekhane shono ,rongin manobere khelay.
ami jabo amar shunar deshe,
sobuj hoye robo chiro sobuje mishe.




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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted October 24th, 2007, 06:51 AM #2 (permalink) |
amio jabo... its been soo long.. nice poem.. thanks..
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Default Posted October 24th, 2007, 01:01 PM #3 (permalink) |
nice poem, wot im suppozed 2 say, im a dur porobashi.......... thanx

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Default Posted October 25th, 2007, 11:14 PM #4 (permalink) |
tomar soob asha puron hok e kamon kori nilakash brO ........Kolponar abiir diye rangiye jaO nijer protiti canvas r biliye daO se anonder chite fota doshomiker protiti konay konay .
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Default Posted October 27th, 2007, 04:21 AM #5 (permalink) |
what a poem man amar o mone pore gelo .sundor hoeche bro
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Default Posted October 30th, 2007, 01:28 AM #6 (permalink) |
more pore gelo desher sriti

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
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