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Default drifting, Posted February 11th, 2007, 06:10 AM #1 (permalink) |
i'm drifting down a river...
Slowly falling asleep...
To the sound of the water moving...
Then I begin to weep...
Thinking of all the good times...
Trying to forget the bad...
Smile at the fact...
We had what we had...
But now it's gone...
Drifting farther away...
Farther away from me...
I wish I could've made you stay...
I know it's over...
Or so you said...
I keep thinking about you...
I can't get you out of my head...
And as I’m drifting further down...
Down this stream of Hell
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Default Posted February 11th, 2007, 06:16 AM #2 (permalink) |
Nice poem aLice ! thx for the share !
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Default Posted February 11th, 2007, 07:11 AM #3 (permalink) |
Nice poem aLice ........ tnkx for sharing ....... btw ... where u been dis long ?

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Default Posted February 11th, 2007, 08:58 AM #4 (permalink) |
Nice poem alice
First i thought its something wid car racing DRIFT
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but its a nice one....thanx for sharing
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Default Posted February 11th, 2007, 11:58 PM #5 (permalink) |
WOW awesome poem

gets me reminiscing like some of ur earlier poems

keep it up
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