do you?

aLice · May 6th, 2007, 03:52 AM

Do you care?
Can you see?
What is now?
What won’t ever be?
You stupid fool,
You are walking blindly,
Into what you don’t know,
The darkness fills the air which makes me wonder if you can find me,
You are so blind,
Too stupid,
That you don’t know so if I tell,
Tell you how I feel,
How you make me feel,
Would you?
Would you?
If I told you,
If I explained who I am would you except,
Except the real me?
I don’t think you would,
I know that you will reject me,
Turn your back on me,
I want to scream, cry out,
Not in pain or agony,
I want, no need to YELL, SCREAM, SHOUT to the sky,
It’s this frustration inside of me,
Frustration that makes me, me.

**afsana911** · May 6th, 2007, 07:55 AM

ahare... jomano frustration prokash pachche. hehe. nice one. alice strikes again.

**Rayan** · May 6th, 2007, 10:46 AM

Umm It was good not the best one of Alice's but it was good

**mina** · May 6th, 2007, 02:18 PM

Aare Alice...r u ok...? do u nee a sholder to cry? that's sound realy frustration

**BoIRaGi** · May 6th, 2007, 03:13 PM

nice poem again dear .............. but wot happend katie dear ? ....... y u seems q8 frustated ? ...... dats not U ....... dont be upset dear ....... keep smiling.

I want, no need to YELL, SCREAM, SHOUT to the sky,
It’s this frustration inside of me,
Frustration that makes me, me

tnkx for sharing dis awesome poem dear :d

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