Dishehara Pothik

**BoIRaGi** · November 24th, 2007, 06:34 AM

Eta k ami kono poem bolbo na ... shudhu hotat moner majhe kichu kotha uki diyechilo ....... segulo k typ kore tule dilam tomader samne !! ..... asha kori kew vul bujhbe na

Se je nisthur prithib ek Disehara pothik
Chute choleche Ojana gontobbe
Jane nako opekkha korche ki tar jonnO
OnontO digonter opare

Rokte mishiye niyeche mrittu paniO
Gotishilota jenO tar ekmatrO kamona bashona
Shudhu chai poth cholar shokti
Hok se bish baspO othoba Rokter bonna

Chute cholar pother kontok jenO
Norom tultule carpet
Shoto kach er tukrO jeno
Shoda chumbon roto tar podo jugol

Osru shunnO biborno chokh jenO
Itihas er nirob sakkhi
jolontO ogni kundO jenO tar kache
Him shitol borofer tukrO

Se jenO kobor theke uthe asha ek mrittu duut
E karoneY sobai take eriye cholche
Mone mone kotukti korche
duur hoy na keno e Oshoni Shonket !!

chitkar diye bolte goye O golay atke jay shobder kata gulo
mistisko O jenO Oshohojogita shuru koreche tar sathe
chokh O jenO aaj ondho hote chaise kichu dekhbe na bole
haat hote chaise pongu , kaw k dhorbe na bole

e jeno tar nijer toiri jale joriye jawa boka makrosha
oti apon tiir er fola dhuke giyeche buker vitore , nijer ojante
Osru shiktO gaal beye goriye porche rokter Obiram dhara
Nissash e veshe ashche jenO GolitO lash er gondhO !!

Tai se chute choleche OshantO pothik hoye
Edik sedik .. charidik,
peteY hobe take ...... pother disha ,
jekhane thakbe shudhu se r Ondhokarer Norjonota
kew jenO take r khuje na pay !!!!!!

**Rio** · November 24th, 2007, 07:35 AM

mamuuuuuuuu fata fatiiiiiiiiii . sundor hoiche mamu. chalie jao lekha and amader die jao sundor sundor gift hisebe. thanks mamale

CorE · November 24th, 2007, 09:40 AM

Priyo mukh priyo shukh
Nosshor prithibike paye diye theli..
chiro chena bhalobasha onakangkhito shopno
Attar Torey Hridoyer bondonai nimogno Boiragi..

awesome obhibekti.. Charmed.. surprised.. Guess time for u to become shongshari.. not boiragi anymore ;>

feona · November 24th, 2007, 11:22 AM

onek kothin
onek jotil
onek dukho

kintu tumi likcho?

**BoIRaGi** · November 24th, 2007, 01:31 PM

RiO -->> tnkx mamu .... tomar poem O oneek miss korchi

CorE -->> lol ....ei koita line er sathe Songshari howar ki connection seta to bujlam na

feona -->> ami ki kokhonO onno karO lekha copyu kroechi naki

...... eta amar Y lekha koekti elomelo shobdO shomvar !!

feona · November 25th, 2007, 09:29 AM

Disehara hoye na gurle hoy na

**Prova** · November 25th, 2007, 11:39 AM

Nice...sounds great....but amar erokom poem mathay dhuke na....kinda hard for me....i don have a great mind to get this great poem....

..and i know why feona said that...coz tore erokom poem manay na....lol..sorry

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**mina** · November 27th, 2007, 12:17 AM

CORE jemonti bollo oitai kor...

Thanks to core..

**BoIRaGi** · November 27th, 2007, 12:23 AM

er pichone jukti ki ? ....... tora sobai ki chas toder majhe BoIRaGi r na thakuk ...... Songshari hole to r BoIRaGi k khuje pabi na ...... tokhon ?

**mina** · November 27th, 2007, 12:23 AM

At Least matha thik thakbe

The Following 5 Users Say Thank You to BoIRaGi For This Useful Post:
Chonchola Horini (November 24th, 2007), feona (November 24th, 2007), kijo (November 24th, 2007), mina (November 27th, 2007), Rio (November 24th, 2007)

The Following User Says Thank You to Rio For This Useful Post:
BoIRaGi (November 24th, 2007)

The Following 2 Users Say Thank You to CorE For This Useful Post:
BoIRaGi (November 24th, 2007), mina (November 27th, 2007)

The Following User Says Thank You to feona For This Useful Post:
BoIRaGi (November 24th, 2007)

The Following User Says Thank You to feona For This Useful Post:
mina (November 27th, 2007)

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BoIRaGi (November 25th, 2007)

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