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Default ~ Desolate Emotions ~, Posted November 25th, 2006, 09:20 PM #1 (permalink) |
written few months back. By me and Lami





And the marbles plays in the brain
They hug each other and fight again.
Desolate emotion – sets in the ocean
In the waves that’s drifting –
And the game – jams on shifting.

Now I live by the edges
Corner of the street and sunken ledges.
Heaven comes but never reaches
So I built my house near the sandy beaches.

Watching the water cascading the shores
Washing away emotions of long lost bores
Sands of time fall from my fingers
Spilling years of memories which
--once lingered

The rains comes and drenches the soul
Crying desperately, caressing the cold
House once built- a desolate haven
Blackened sky overthrows my grievance.
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Default Posted November 25th, 2006, 09:54 PM #2 (permalink) |
NovemberRain bro again a nice poem good come back.bro ur a true writer.
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Default Posted November 26th, 2006, 12:41 AM #3 (permalink) |
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The rains comes and drenches the soul
Ahhh,....

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Watching the water cascading the shores
Washing away emotions of long lost bores
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lol nice..pls keep it up!
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Default Posted November 28th, 2006, 11:20 PM #5 (permalink) |
really nice poem.
Sands of time fall from my fingers
Spilling years of memories which

--once lingered
[ gr8 work ]
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